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Nice wow

Like how this story is written!

This is amazing! And mysterious totally caught my attention can't wait for more. Nice well done and keep it up. I'm amaze you say this is unedited it doesn't look like that.

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Interesting

Interesting, and nice.

Love you're way of writing, barely notice mistakes. would like more dialogue.

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Good

Poetry is always one of the most simple, but yet inspiring way of writing.

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Mysterious

Wow this is definitely mysterious, wow you hit my attention and in amazed in how you develop it. Also I like your way of writing, no mistakes that I could see of and it's an interesting story in the aspect of captivating you, leaving wanting more. Well done an d can't wait for more

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Interesting

Interesting love the mystery behind all, and what really happen. It has me captivated, can't wait to read more. Well done small suggestion small grammatical mistakes can be edited so you good overall well dome 💕👍🏻

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Unique

Love how the author gave a brief explanation of what the book and title would be and meant. Honestly, it has a lot of unique names that I've never heard of! Can't wait to see where this goes. well done!

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Mysterious

Got the appealing of mysterious. Author did her out most.
Minor needs to be fixed and that can be done, it will be an interesting book, which got to say it got my attention. Mystery is something I like and hope to see twists and turns of who did all this.

so keep it up author!

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Nice

Poems I love..its nice to read honest poems! should keep adding more! well done!!

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Reccomended

If you are into time travel, and want to feel your leaving this place of quarantine I recommend this. Im amazed the author decided to use the real situation to plot it. Also It brought a couple of other memories in real life event! cant wait to see this book advance well!

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Nice and cute

I don't know why but I found it cute... well done. It's short and nicely done. keep it up!!

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Breathtaking

This has been a thrill ❤️💯🙉 omg amazingly can't believe this book came to me by accident. The author is amazing. It's inspirational thanks for the dedication and time! ❤️ Really keep doing more!

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Interesting

Interesting story got to say, it has mystery and thrill. I didn't see no mistakes. Just a small suggestion the emojis hearts would be better removed. I think it would best to put something else to compliment the mystery story.
Also, its intriguing because it feels like the malicious person is someone else and not entirely that person who she calls demon. Like the story concept would like to know more, so I'll keep. it reading.
well done and keep it up.!

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Nice

wow, I got halfway through and so far wow.
It's really interesting I shall continue reading as well, just keep up the good work. I like your technique, small mistakes but barely seen. if you're concentrated you wouldn't even notice it. so can't wait to read another book. well done love it!

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Good

Ok so the story isn't bad, It has potential but needs improvement. My recommendation would be to separate paragraphs. for better reading. The start was good it holds mystery like it. also, it involves mafia so it will be thrilling. Character development bit more, you can do all that editing it by parts. so you have potential just give yourself a bit more of a push.

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Love it

Wow, a mystery since the beginning has you feeling on edge. I love the summary well done.

I got to say, I'm expecting more, this looks thrilling, love the mystery and what's happening. it's well made. I didn't see mistakes. that I notice or I was to engross on the book to even notice.
General love it, can't wait for more.

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Story on story

First thing first. I want to say nice well done.
I like the concept of telling a story in a story, really different.
If my guess is right, this is the daughter of the girl in the summary right?
I barely saw mistakes that are good. just a small recommendation the first part of you as a writer explaining. about the book. I would suggest you write that in a separate section and upload it before starting this part of the story. so It looks neatly.

everything else nicely done, can't wait for more.

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Love it

Wow, I love supernatural I'm a sucker for wolves and vampires and I love this, I find it emotional, Cute, Interesting, and nice. Keep it up can't wait for more! Love the start also!!

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Poems

I usually find poems soothing. I like it!
Very nice and with a nice flow. Minor mistakes but can be edited. Keep it up!

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Alpha Blood

So I'll start with what I see.

Grammatical errors, which can be fixed through edits. The dialogue was a bit confusing, make sure to separate thoughts or dialogues well.
The story sounds interesting it's about a wolf, my advice shortens certain stuff an tries to explains bit more.
Also was it me or after the prologue, it said six instead of two or one? IM confused on that area.

Try to give more details, the book has potential, but needs some more details, also is this modern times or not? because I saw haven use words that make it sound like modern times.

If you make those changes the book will be better, it has potential so try to re-edit what you have and you will do well.
Keep up the good work!

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Mafia, Lies, Badass, and reminder of 50 shades of gray

So first, this story reminded me so badly of %) shades of gray. Secondly, I know you left a note, and every writer has their own way of writing and doing things.
I respect that!!!

IN my opinion and advice, if once the book is done you edit it, change a few things. They're a lot of grammatical errors and abbreviations making it hard to have a flow. I know we all make mistakes but it seems it was written fast in a hurry.

I do love the book, I'm in love with it, it has marvelous potential just needs some fix here and their. love the mafia thing, didn't expect it. so keep up the good work!

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Interesting

Really interesting start, its vampires, I'm a sucker for vampires. Love the beginning really interesting, can't wot for more.

Small thing I note was a grammatical mistake, on the name of Vernis city is it Vernis or Venis?

overall can't wait or more, keep it up!

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Interesting

Interesting story, straight to the problem. I advice you as a fellow writer to try to seperate the lo g paragraphs into shorter ones. Really intriguing can't wait for more 💯

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Different

wasn't expecting to be a short story, it was well written, love it the refreshing names, and the places, totally different. this has a lot of potentials, can't wait for more work. Well done!

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WOW

HOLY MOTHER OF ALL GODDESSS!!
This is why I love wolves, even though I write about vampires. wolves are the ultimate. well done, can't wait for more and damn love the female lead.

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good so far

Got to say for some reason I got reminded of a comic I'm reading.
It's interesting, but I feel it could get better. Of course, have to wait and see how it develops.
Minor mistakes here, but can be fixed.
Expect to read more, intriguing. keep it up!

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WoW!

Wow, you captivated me. this is amazing. It's so different than the other books, it has mystery, thrilling, and so much. The first chapter was a bomb definitely love it and love the names choices. I barely saw mistakes can't wait for more. with good promotion, this can be Amazing!

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Interesting!

A very interesting beginning leaves you wondering what is happening. Like the way you write. Just a small suggestion the big paragraphs try to separate them into four to six lines. I barely saw mistakes. Can't wait to see more of it. Well done!

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Unexpected

wow, uhmmm I got no words.

I was expecting to be a chapter but not the whole story chapter, and everything was so unexpected I'm left speechless.

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Had to do my own review!

Well people I had to do my own review.
So, The king of the Ruby Crown is another one of my babies I'm eager to write. This as well as the sapphire queen have meanings. So expect action, defying between each other, hate, love, and romance with a bit of sexy here and there. My Nikolas and rose will hate each others guts. So it's expected to be the first chapter up by August.

Enjoy!

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Interesting

Interesting, at first was doubtful because I don't tend to read like friends and that type of story but it gets you, so it's interesting. I love your writing style, barerrly saw mistakes a f would reccomend to anyone who love friends story and murder. U should apply for the midsummer competition!

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Wolves

Wolves what I love, interesting. Just an advice change the numbers to letter numbers.

The rest love the story has mystery and cliffhanger nice! ❤️

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Captive!

Interesting, mysterious and captivate that's how I felt, some small grammatical mistakes but editing can fix it, also I'm amazed it's interesting will keep reading this. It's so dark!

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Bring back memories!

You made old memories come back, bringing tears to me for that person I miss and is no longer alive.
It's well done and believe me you made me feel and remember wow!

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First!!

My apologies, been reading this and thought I left my review. Too many books lol. Going back to the review, I got to say that first, I learn a lot from you. this is a an amazing book, your writing, grammar everything is awesome. love the beginning of how you take the imagination to a different place and your fantasy is amazing. the way you express the story is amazing. It has a bit of everything and I'm still reading it. Good things take time to enjoy!
Well done!

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Interesting!

Wow, interesting way to start. Love the choice of names, it's refreshing. Just small advice in punctuation. The first letter in dialogue capitalizes it. that would be all, hope to read more and keep up the good work.

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Interesting

First thing first, it's an interesting story. Secondly I saw a couple of small mistakes that can be edited, nice plot it gets the attention and want to know more of what happen. So keep up the good work!

Small advice try to keep the dialogue seperated and try to keep paragraphs at least six sentences long.

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Interesting

As a wolf lover this is my favorite, small thibgs need to be fixed but overall it's well done has potential so keep it up! ❤️

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Improvements

First thing first, the story has potential but needs a couple of things fixed, like a follow writer said, it confused me because I wasn't expecting also her being a supernatural. So it will be best you explain of and change it. Some things where amiss and you can do it. So just edit it and you will be good to go! ❤️

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Interesting

First, got to say I was confused because didn't expect to be a book about vampires, so got me a bit lost while reading the summary and then knowing about the story plot. its interesting really creative and grammar mistakes just a few they can be fixed. also, the writer used a really good way to capture you. I'm just halfway through but looks really interesting keep it up and Good luck!

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Waiting to see where this goes....

The story sounds interesting and intrigued.
I'm curious to see where this goes and all the reasons behind it. her character says a lot, but needs more insight of Adrian and her. I know it the way you might be planning to do it and it's fine. every writer has their way of writing.
Also, dialogue needs to be edited, and not many grammar mistakes are done. So well done, keep up the good work!

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Accalia

It's a wolf story. I've read a lot of wolves story in all different kinds and styles. This one reminds me to one and it's interesting. It has potential, just minor mistakes here or there with grammar and a bit of details but that can be edited afterwards. Also I feel the characters are interesting like the choice of names and also looking forward to more, keep up the good work 👏 👏

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Hook!

I'm a wolf lover who am I gonna lie! even though I write about vampires, wolf are my things!

Now going back, this book is totally hooked, since the start, the mystery, indifference, and even hate. two persons who will collide and by the looks, it will tun into a love war, can't wait for more well done!!

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Wolves

Wolves, kings, and queens always hit me hard, I love this type of books. I have to say this is good! Would totally recommend it, I've been on it for two days and so far like it, haven't finished it but hey good things take them slow so you can enjoy it!

This book also has potential so the author promotes this, well done, and can't wait for another book!

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lovely

Lovely poetry enhancing the feelings of love and of the author! Nicely done. Hope to see more of this poetry!

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Interesting

Interesting way of writing a story, it's been a while I've read a book like this. Also it's a mysterious story, so I'm expecting more adventure and the mystery between all these groups of guys! writing No mistakes, so it was good! well done and continue promoting it!

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heart warming

I got to say I'm a hopeless romantic when it comes to this type of story!
I usually cry my ass off.

This story is a huge potential for this platform, it's well written and barely see mistakes. just a small piece of advice the flashbacks ty to change it in a way we know and don't get confused or lost. Overall it's sweet nice and specially heartwarming! well done!

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DAMN!!

FIrst DAMN author! this is wow, I-I have no words, I felt goosebumps while reading this. And I kindly say this is a five out of five! emotions, capture you and the cliffhanger wow!
I got to say I was lost for a moment, it went so fast that I was like, when, how? so much, you know how to capture the reader, mind, heart, and body!

well done! and hope this gets a lot of reviews cause it's worth it!

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Interesting

First things first, I'm a wolf lover.
The book has a lot of potential and I like how things are going. I still feel some things are missing, and you find a couple of grammar mistakes, but that can be fixed. Also it's interesting that she's not a normal wolf, I'm interested to know more about her background.
Thirdly a small advice when you're doing dialogue don't seperate them, it looks strange.

Keep up the good work

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Had to do my own review!!

As the Author and writer I had to do my own review and I'll honest!
I love my book! honestly do! so you should also haha lol joking!

I know I have a few mistakes that need to be fixed, grammar mistakes here and there but it's my first time working on this! so be patient with me XD

I totally recomend and it's not your normal, vampire, aggressive, submissive book!
This is different! so hope You read it and love it as much I love writing it!

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Dream man!

First thing first, the book has potential, it's an amazing book, with a well done plot. but has a lot of grammatical mistakes and some parts where confusing and even weird. The way the characters acted was a bit over the top, and left you thinkin on a lot.

Secondly their was no character description and I would had loved to have known how they looked or where. a lot was missing in this book and I think that with a good editor and some help it can be fixed and be an awesoem book!

I do reccomend it! totally! it's lovable and beautiful and makes me want to run right in front of a handsome and billionaire man.

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Steamy 🥨

Steamy as hell, this is way differ to my supernatural love of wolves and vampires. This makes me want a android robot 😂😂 totally recommend it! 🔥

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Mysterious

First of all, this book should be a whole. I like the idea of making them short and it keeps it interesting. but I would love to see this as a whole book. its mysterious and interesting. your imagination as an author is way good. Im amazed you use different years in the future. well done! Keep it up!

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recommended

This story is totally recommended for the lovers of supernatural and the vampires, also for those who love an erotic moment this books is your thing! awesome story, the Bampire will blow you! so give it a try! XX
well done author! captivating!

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Different

Im not a reader of fan for end of the world, apocaliptic thingd. even though Im a fan of horror and thrilling things! But this book can catch your attention without noticing!
Its good I like the ay the story is written. I actually read this outloud because it would rhyme in a cool way! so good job author!!

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Life

I like how you relate the poems to actual life events and things, it's rare to find poems, and rare to be good!

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Interesting

A book about love, love the summary entrance nice..cant wait to see antartica melted to a peanut. also its gonna get interesting as they both meet and develop feelings!

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interesting

Now this is different that what i would usually find here. Korean related i love it honestly do, im a fan of korean men myself, so i recommend the book if your into all this stuff . well done

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Great!!

The beginning of this book is amazing, the way the summary ws put on together got to say got me laughing! it is well done, a few changes in words but overall interesting, keep up the good work

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Feelings

This book shows feelings, the characters feelings which feels like your own.
Well done author! Hope to see more of it!
I do recommend this book, also the names are so refreshing.

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Epic

Love this book so much its such a good book, im dying for more.
author youre awesome your book is addictive and i want more !!

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True Love

WOW>>IM WOW
this is such an amazing book, i felt so identified with this book ..that wow its beautiful i totally recoomend this if ur a romatic to hell read it its beautiful..wow

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Fuking WORTH IT!!

THIS SHIT TOPS!!
Like Damn! this guys stole my heart, mind and soul..in love with evrything here!! this books has every emotion on it! so if you feel its quite long to read, well let me tell you, this ASS BOOK IS WORTH YOUR TIME!!
NOW ...BOW DOWN BICHES!

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Beauty

wow, first time i read a book that has no action on it, im amazed who it revolved on there life and shiness. its like a fairy book in a modern way. so i totally reccomend it if u love romcon.

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Amazingy Funny!

Wow!! what can i say, people read this definitely should read this, i got wrinkles from smiling and luaghing, this was an amazing book, ive read so much books of differ kind but DAMN, this just top my frst place in books, amazing it has a lot of emotions and its so good, I want to tell to the author bravo thats an amazing book and well done, i felt so inspired that wow, this should be definitely published and even a movie should be done, i know ill be reading this book again more than once, i got to say im not even over this book haha well done author well done, your so amazing i need more like this!!!

ps. erotica over level!!

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One Word, AWESOME

im excited reading this, ive been a wolf lover always and had read a couple of vampire books, nd nit like this one that had caught my attention so much that i wish something like that could happened!
so far loving it, interesting! hope to read more soon!bravo author!!

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Amazing Book!

FIRST THINGS FIRST!!!
This book is Hella amazing! Omg, like nothing like I had read before amazing writing, certain small mistakes but hey, we ain't perfect, overall cool, love the plot, love the way you give POV to each one there thoughts are always important!
The fact that the author gives that edgy feeling of wanting more is cool, and awesome.
Interesting way of writing a book also, excellent and well done author.
NOW!!
WOLF LOVERS DAMN ID U HAVEN'T READ THIS READDD ITT! I SAY READ IT DAMN IT! YOU LOVE MIRKO AND HIS CRAKEN ❤️🤣 SO SUPPORT HER!

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