Alexannah

I ship: (Harry Potter) Harry/Luna, Albus/Minerva, Severus/Lily (Doctor Who) any Doctor/Rose, Jack/Donna, Luke/Jenny (Buffy) Spike/Buffy, Giles/Joyce. Self-titled Queen of Angst.

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Funny!

Methinks they'll be updating the Hogwarts Quidditch rules ... hehe.

Great idea. It made me laugh. I can just picture Harry struggling not to laugh while he thinks "Why did I never think of that?" It certainly beat his own record of five minutes. Loved it, cool little fic!

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Interesting idea

I really enjoyed this fic, I thought it was a good idea tackled pretty well. Hermione's logic was ... interesting ... I certainly would never have thought of that. The story flowed pretty well and the characters felt real. My main criticism would be the length--the story was pretty long for a single chapter, it could put people off, and I would suggest splitting into several shorter chapters. I very nearly didn't read it because of the length, but I'm very glad I did. It ended well and would make an excellent start to a longer story if you decided, or stand strong as it is. Very nice effort.

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