Alexis Jade

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Trapped in the Closet

I think you have the making of a great book and I can’t wait to see what happens next!!! The only thing I would say it to try and make it so that as the reader we can tell a little easier when they are talking to another person and when it’s them talking internally. Keep up the good work!!!!

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