Alliex

Glasgow

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Excellent Read!

I've only read the first chapter so far but this story is really captivating. The paragraphs are a good length, not too long. Very easy to read. I love how you describe the scenes around the character. I really felt like I was there!

Saw a few spelling mistakes but that's just me being picky!

I will definitely be reading the other chapters and I'm really looking forward to it! I cant wait to see where this character's journey goes! Keep up the good work!

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Excellent Read

I don't usually read this genre of stories but I loved this. Your paragraphs are a great length which makes it very smooth to read. Your descriptions are brilliant and put me right in the scene. When reading I felt like I was in the story seeing it through her eyes. The idea of cupid is amazing. Well done and I look forward to seeing where this goes!

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