AmelTess30

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Magnificent

Your writing style is so good. I loved the plot and how it developed and sure convinced me to read the previous books. Even though it took me some time to read the whole thing, I do not regret it. Why? Because your writing skills are just perfect. Though I believe I should read the previous in able to understand the plot even more. I won't lie, I am not used to this story category but I am very happy that I read yours. You have so much talent. I really think it is perfect. PS I loved Jill throughout the whole story no matter what. Very very good job. Continue and please never stop because I think we all deserve to read such a perfect written story. I bet all your books are just as perfect as this one. I'll go check and I am sure I won't regret it. I highly recommend it. This is iconic and so well written!

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Amazing

I love the direction the story is taking. This will surely be an incredible story as the start itself is good. I don't know a lot about Pakistan so I am very happy to know a little more about how life is there. This is a great start. Continue and never stop.

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This is incredible

Your writing skills are just perfect. The details, the plot and the style is just perfect to me. I would like to get some advice from you. Girl this story is just incredible, really really good. I love it and I love the details, it just add to the beauty of the story. I love how you started because we readers do not know who is who and what happened, why is this woman here and what about Chantel and so on. I just like it very much. Keep going. You rock girl!

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Powerful

This is so much powerful. I love the badass girls in this. I love the plot and I really like this type of story. Stories that include ancient time. I love it. This is perfect. The characters are so inspiring and beautiful. Thank you for this masterpiece. Keep it up please, we want more.

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Incredible

I love it so much. I love the characters, the unusual names, the details and your writing style. You know what you are talking about. I love the plot and I love where the story is going so far. I did not hesitate to read the whole chapter because it is so so good. I am looking up for the next chapters. I highly recommend this book because it's just so good. You have so much potential. Continue and please never stop because you guys are so talented and I really hope you get published because this is so good!

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Amazing

It is so so good. You have so much potential. I love the characters, imagery, the importance and representation you gave to the colors. I love the fact that in every chapters we learn a little more about Maya and I really love the fact the fact that you've talk about self-harming. I love everything about it. I am really happy that you've include Holland too because he is yellow as you said which obviously represents the sunshine. I cannot tell you how much I liked it. Continue and please never stop cause we don't want to be deprive of your talent.

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Amazing

I love this book. It should get published. I'm really looking up for the next chapters. You have so mich potential. Please continue and never stop. I love how you show us and not always tell us. I think I really like the characters, the dad a little less.

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Magnificent

I think this is a wonderful story that has a very good plot. I love the fact that you included supernatural in this. I love the suspense and the thruths are not reavealed all at once but throughout the story. There are some grammar mistakes but your story is good. I surely recommend it and you do have potential. Continue and never stop.

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Incredible

I just have to say that your book is so good. I so want to know what happens next like is he an agent or something. I love also the fact that it is in the first person and not third person as most stories are. I like the fact that you add all these details about the houses, your clothes, your brother. You describe everything perfectly. Good job!

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It is incredible so far

I love love love Blake. She is such a great character, my favorite one in the story. She is a great example and I love the plot. So far I love it so much and I highly recommends it. There are some grammar mistakes but the plot is so so good. Beautiful story!

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Really funny

I love the narrator! The narrator seems like really cool and funny person. I like the jokes like Adam and Steve, I like how you roast Oli and how you described this shirtless attractive guy. You do have a lot of potential. I love your story and I can't wait until you write the next chapter.

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