Anna-Louise Dann

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Enjoyable read

I am really enjoying this story, however I would like to see more descriptions within the text to set the scenes a little more, but this can be achieved during editing. I Love the plot and the flow of the story; at times Emma can appear to be a little wooden, but that is another thing that can be addressed through editing and character development.
Overall a really enjoyable story so far with lots of twists and turns.
Keep up the good work.

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