Anna Shea

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Enchating

This story flows so beautifully with such elegant words and characters yet a dark plot behind it all. I really enjoyed this. The mix of the dark and the light reminds me of Mary Shelley's writing style. The addition of french made this story feel so much more real and like a love story.

There were a couple of punctuation errors but that can be easily fixed.

Overall, it was astounding and I can't wait to read more,

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Engaging

Its a very interesting story that grabs you at the first words and keeps you interested until the end. The way that the author jumps back and forth from telling the story and exposition keeps you interesting and is done in a way that plays to the overall plot of the story. Overall, really well done.

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