Annabelle_Graceton

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This is a really interesting story, I love the plot idea and the characters. I'm really excited to see where you're going to take this! My only criticizing comment would be that you have a section in chapter 4 that repeats itself on into chapter 5, so you should probably take a look at that and fix it. Other than that, everything looks great and I can't wait to read more! Update soon! :)

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