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The very first sentence is enough to catch attention. The idea is so very unique—the perspective is one I’ve personally never seen in a long novel like this, and it’s intriguing. Your words create vivid imagery and even those who haven’t been to any National Park can clearly picture the scene—hear the herd, feel the chill, sense the tension. Along with introducing a setting, you’ve already gotten me hooked on the backstory of the herd. Just the smallest details have me thinking: how will “pack (herd) mentality” affect the decisions of Jin and Dahj and all the others? How will their setting, and perhaps intrusions from humans, change the course of the story? I’m very excited to finish reading. Great job!

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