Apollo989

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a truly magnificent writing style! Your use of grammar and punctuation was great, and the vocabulary was apt for the story, A great read.

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Amazing plot. I have read till chapter 14 for now and I love it! At first i felt as though the story was a bit slow paced and now i understand your train of thought. The use of grammar and punctuation is perfect and i like where the story's going. Although i feel like the paragraphs are too short, other than that, the story is perfectly set :)

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Till a few days back i never read fantasy books as i thought they would be too hard to comprehend, but this book really changed my perspective on that! I love how the author makes use of his vocabulary and how he knows where to put simple and complex words. The pace of the story also seems apt as it moves with uniform speed and the itself is an overall great read. For the first time i am eager to read all the chapters of a fantasy novel.

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