Wolf Not Wolf
I like the story so far, and there are only a few things I would change. The grammar isn't 100% correct but it's only small mistakes, so it's okay. Inkitt is a much hard platform to navigate compared to Wattpad, and I know this because I'm also a Wattpad writer. However, the characters are well-written and that's very important in stories. If you fix the small grammar mistakes the story will be even better!
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Personally, I think the writing seems a little more immature, but that's fine because none of us are mature adults. If you want to capture more readers, see if you can avoid dictating Hayley's thoughts so specifically when she's not actually having thoughts.
Overall, I really enjoyed it! You can message me on my wall or go to my Wattpad account in my bio if you want to talk more!
Also sorry for the long review