Artemis the Rebel

Heyo! I'm Arty, and I love Star Wars, Venom, drawing, various other things, and, of course, writing stories! ;D

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You made me cry.

I wish this had happened for real. Him falling off of the catwalk somehow made it even worse.
This was amazing and perfect, as far as I'm concerned.
I'm so sorry about your friend. I roleplay, too, so I know exactly how close you can get to not only the people you roleplay with, but the characters you create.
You could leave this as a stand alone or you could continue it. Both would be fine. I suspect another chapter of it would be just as beautiful as this one was.
Thank you.

-Arty

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