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Pieces of the world

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Good job!

I enjoyed this book, it's simple and calming. I love nature and so far I enjoyed the theme. The words are appropriate to give a glimpse of one moment in the nature's world.

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Excellent story!

You understood the story and its need very well. Which is why the choice of the writing style from first person narration that matches the character's own personality and traits. Also, you kept the interest going and attention locked on the whole story. Good job

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Cool concept

It's a good concept and what it needs a good fluid writing. Keep up the work and you will have that under your belt in no time.

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