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Hi! I am beyond intrigued by “For her Alone” but I’m not sure if it’s an editing issue, a format issue or needs proofreading...the story repeats chunks of chapters with minor variations, the chronology is off in the middle of chapters & character names are inconsistent - the combination is making the intensity & flow a bit convoluted/confusing. All of which are able to be remedied to allow for a smoother experience for the reader. I just wasn’t sure if it happened during an update or editing or if it was intentional...the storyline is compelling and I’m hooked - just the interruptions make the read slow or take away from adrenaline moments. - xo

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