Australianchic

Just a writer hoping to put my words on paper.

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I like the storyline, and would love to see where it leads. Unfortunately, I think your grammar and punctuation skills need a lot of work. You need to separate the dialogue with speech marks and make clear who is speaking. This story could go a long way if you fix these aspects, otherwise it will be unappealing for readers to continue reading. I hope this doesn't discourage you and you keep writing. If you ever need a helping hand, ask me! I shall reply and help whenever I can.

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