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~๐™‰๐™ž๐™œ๐™๐™ฉ ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™™ ๐™™๐™–๐™ฎ, ๐™ฌ๐™๐™ฎ'๐™จ ๐™ž๐™ฉ ๐™จ๐™ค ๐™๐™๐™–๐™ฉ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™ž๐™จ ๐™ก๐™ค๐™ฃ๐™œ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™›๐™ค๐™ง ๐™ฎ๐™ค๐™ช ๐™๐™ค๐™ก๐™ก๐™ค๐™ฌ๐™จ ๐™ฌ๐™๐™š๐™ง๐™š๐™ซ๐™š๐™ง ๐™„ ๐™œ๐™ค~ ๐˜ ๐˜ฃ๐˜ญ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฅ ๐˜ฎ๐˜บ ๐˜ช๐˜ฎ๐˜ข๐˜จ๐˜ช๐˜ฏ๐˜ข๐˜ต๐˜ช๐˜ฐ๐˜ฏ ๐˜ช๐˜ฏ๐˜ต๐˜ฐ ๐˜ธ๐˜ฐ๐˜ณ๐˜ฅ๐˜ด ๐˜ต๐˜ฐ ๐˜ฆ๐˜ด๐˜ค๐˜ข๐˜ฑ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ณ๐˜ฆ๐˜ข๐˜ญ๐˜ช๐˜ต๐˜บ

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Different than the rest

Out of all the vampire-related books I've read so far, this is one of the best I've ever come across. The descriptions and the history narration technic are absolutely mind-blowing and I'm really in awe at the writer's skill. I thoroughly enjoyed this book a lot and I really hope it gets the recognition it deserves

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Needs a bit of improvement

I like the author's writing style because her grammar and punctuation are really good. However, what frustrated me the most was the fact that her narration in certain scenarios is quite short.
Always remember to 'show' your readers rather than just 'telling' them.
Another small point that bothered me was the fast pace. The story feels really fast-paced in some parts. You might want to think about just editing it a bit.
Lastly, I wish the character would be a bit more developed because it surprised me how easily the female protagonist gave in to the male protagonist who actually killed her parents. Mate bond or not, I expected her to process her emotions for a bit longer.
But then again, I've read up to chapter 10 so far. I'm pretty sure the characters would develop by then.
Until that happens, I wish the writer the best of luck because I know that she's really talented!

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Intriguing

This story is literally so flawlessly written. Starting from the plot to the characters, it's just amazing! I really like how the writer describes all the small details which make the readers feel as if they are witnessing the entire act themselves. The character backgrounds are also unique and the entire buildup was seriously good in more ways than one.
This book truly managed to evoke a lot of emotions out of me. Hats off to the author for creating such an amazing piece of work!

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Blown Away

This story is just so well written that I'm literally losing my head right now. The author knows how to reel her readers in with her captivating words. This book has kept me on the edge of my seat since I started reading it. Truth be told, I hate horror genre because...Oh well, I hate ghosts big time.
After reading this, I think I looked over my shoulder at least a hundred times, in fear.
Hats off to the writer for creating such an amazing piece of work!
Keep going! I can't wait to read the rest!

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Interesting but needs a bit help

I have to say that the book was truly a good read. If you are looking for a romance where two individuals help each other out. This book is the right one for you.
However, since the writer mentioned that english is not her first language, there are some pretty little silly grammatical mistakes that needs major editing. Also what disturbed me the most was the references. I constantly found myself confused whenever the writer mentioned 'hell...' and for a moment I thought I was reading a fantasy romance. Sure the effect was used for exaggeration but still. Then there's the part about Dark calling Ray 'Little one' in a medieval fashion and also the whole wood cutting thing and then switching back to normal citylife. It's really confusing. I'll suggest the writer to take these points into consideration apart from all that, I truly liked the story a lot.
It has lots of promise and the plot-line is quite unique. I'm sure that with a bit of editorial help, the writer can improve the book in the long run.

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