Autumnbrooke Diaz

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Intriguing story

This makes me want to read the other novels and see what is happening, you're dialect seems a little forced in some places, maybe work on adding detail and more emotion through your writing. Definitely on the right track!

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Interesting Story

I would love to see you dive into more detail and background with the characters, your writing could use a little bit more of a flow to it, but other than that I thought it was well written with an interesting story.

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