A. King

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Has great potential!

I am definitely hooked with this one! The plot is intriguing from the very first chapter, and it pulls you in instantly! The creativity behind the universe's concept, the peculiar creatures, the magic, I think that it has potential. There were a few technical errors in the writing, but it's a minor thing compared to the positives. I have yet to get to know the characters and their personalities more, but so far so good!

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Captivating!

I got hooked! I really enjoy the concept of the book and am looking forward to reading more novels from the author! Boris at first was kind of annoying to me but I overall warmed up to him a bit and I can see why he was the right type of character in the story! Nice work!

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Addictive!

I absolutely love the concept, and the main characters. Vrox has captured my heart from the first moment, with his strength but also his adorable and confused nature when it comes to Kira and anything human! I cannot wait to read more about them, so I'll make sure to follow for updates!

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