Good Work ❤
It's an amazing plotline you have chosen.❤
Read the story now
Body-shaming is one of the many evils in society and bringing that out is such good work. ❤
The MC is strong and sweet at the same time, which makes her more appealing ❤ I liked Jeremy too, he is so cute and sweet... Overall the characters are made beautiful.
However, you just have to work on the facts that instead of telling the readers, 'show' them. And constrictions to make the dialogue smoother and flowy... You have to work on your Grammar a bit. It's every non-native English problem so you just have to proofread it after writing and then publish it. And lastly, use Grammarly, it's great... And would help you with your tiny mistakes here and there ❤
Nonetheless, an amazing piece of work!
Keep writing ❤