B.J. Smith

Just a writer who wants to share her craft with the world. After enthusiast.

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Never read something so unique before... Truly!!

Okay, so where to start, where to start. Won't lie; I was severely confused at the beginning of the book. Though that is my fault. I do intend to read the prior books in the series to get a better understanding of what's going on. Though, this work is magnificent!!

I have never read anything like it. Every character introduced has their own flaws and are exciting to read about once they fall on the page. Love how much everyone fawns over babies in here (Trying not to spoil much) and is so refreshing.

Now personally I think this book is so good it belongs on shelves next to writers like Stephen King or Anne Rice. Not trying to butter you up. Truly do think that. The writing style is so... well... stylistic in its own way and unique. Not a lot of people will get its gist but that's the brilliance of it in my opinion.

Then going back to the olden days of plantations and the like... chef's kiss. It just made sense for the plot. All in all, I think this work was a 10/10 and deserves more praise than it's getting.

Good job author!!

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Modern Maya Banks in the making 😍😍

Okay. So this book had me in my feelings so much. Literally was in tears because of every characters impactful pasts and stories. Made me connect with them more.

Then the spice level was off the charts. Didn't know what I expected going into this but it definitely was not some off the wall sexy wham bam thank you ma'am shit. Haha.

Character development was great. Grammer and sentence structure weren't perfect but hey. Whose is? All in all this is a book to pop open when you're looking for your next smut fix.

Great job author. Hope to read more from you.

10/10

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How enticing

Wasn't sure what to expect going into this story. There is so much chaos going on that you have to take a moment to let all the drama sink in. This is definitely a more serious book to go into but I'm glad to have gotten a glimpse into these people's lives.

The writing was good. Sentence structure can be improved but that all comes with practice. We all have to start somewhere. Nevertheless, the character development was spot on and cliffhangers left me wanting more. Good job author.

10/10

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The Great Gatsby meets Dynasty

Whew!! Lots to unpack where this book is concerned... Guilty pleasure for sure. Is it the most perfect piece of literature? No, but what story is? We all have our different tastes and Love Is My Dying Wish definitely fits the bill.

The plot was great and characters had varying personalities that you'll get lost in. Now, as for the writing, it sort of jumped all over the place. Got confused as to what was going on and though sentence structure made reading harder once I really read it over, things made sense. Not a terrible thing. Can always edit and get better over time.

With that being said; these people really are a piece of work. Get that fucked up circumstances have happened but really. This really shows that you can't trust friends or family and everyone is looking to step on others to get high on the totem pole.

Great job author!!

10/10 recommend.

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How will this end 😍😪

**Before anyone reads on, there will be possible spoilers**

Okay, I've only read the first couple of chapters, but can't stop flipping through. The plot is there and is very intriguing... However...

Stefan gets on my nerves. Like I get the point of a mistress. But how are you going to lie to your side piece, declaring that there's no one like her then turn around and tell another lie to your wife acting as if things don't matter.

Makes me sad. For both women. Obviously this guy knows how to have his cake and eat it too. Even though I absolutely loathe this character, it does not mean I loathe the book.

No. I absolutely love it. Can't wait to see what happens in the end. Hopefully the mistress learns to kick him to the curb or even Stephen realizes he needs to be a man and own up to the fact he really does like one girl over the other.

10/10 ❤❤

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When two fated mates collide

Well, well. There's a lot to unload here. Just want to start off this review by saying that the grammar is so good in this book, the author should be writing professionally. Kept my eyes glued to the page.

Also saw that this plot went a different direction than the genre normally does; for once we don't have some chick bending over backward to get rejected?? Yes please. Then throw in the amazing cliffhangers that leave me thirsty for more.

Can already tell our main character has a lot of crap shoveled at her in life and I hope she indeed does find her way. And hopefully, her mate decides to be an upstanding man. We'll see.

Good job author!! 10/10

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Wattpad worthy story

Though English isn't this authors first language, it is pretty well written. The book took me back to the early Wattpad days where we wrote for fun and nothing else.

Loved the plot device of rejected mates. Though its usually not my favorite genre, I couldn't help but flip through the pages. Only at chapter 15 and will be finishing it.

Also love that Louisa has a rejected mate for a good reason. Not just for the heck of it. Most times that is what ruins the story. And then throw in gay representation and having a male friendship without any ties?

Good job author!! 10/10

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Give this book a fighting chance

Okay. First things first; I know a lot of people will shy from this book solely because of the one star review across all boards. I like to give stories the benefit of the doubt and I'm glad I did this time.

Granted, the grammer does need work but isn't the worst I've seen. Upon starting the book, one thought came to mind: CROSS POST TO WATTPAD NOW. This reads exactly like many did back in 2010 and I feel it would blow up over there.

Give us a main love interest that cheats but still draws some girl back into his clutches? And deep down knows he loves her? Swoon worthy.

Haven't finished reading but can't wait to continue.

Go writer ! ❤❤

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We're all suffering in silence 😭✌

This book did not go the way I anticipated but boy am I glad I gave it a chance.

Brilliant opening plot with a sad unfortunate background, then giving our protagonist just a glimmer of hope, only to introduce the gloom once more.

Thoroughly enjoyed it and can't wait for more.

My only advice is to use quotations so we can be sure when dialogue is present.

But way to go author!! 💗💗

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Holy moly

Oh my.

What a ride.

First off.. Brilliant book cover. Really draws you in.

Wasn't sure what to expect going in but I do not regret reading. Tbh. My eyes teared up at the emotional beginning only to feel like I entered the Matrix further on.

This story will keep you on your toes.

Way to go author. Can't wait to read more.

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OMG what a ride

All I can say is WOW.

Have to say as of late books haven't piqued my interest. But once I opened this one I couldn't stop reading.

From the first page action began immediately. Brought me back to the good old days of WATTPAD when we wrote those thrillers to pass time in class.

Can tell our antagonist and protagonist will fall for each other.

At least that's what I think.

Way to go author!!!

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Absolutely entertaining

It's very Harry Potter esque... Only with werewolves. Was obsessed from the very first chapter and couldn't put it down.

Definitely recommend.

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Pleasantly surprised.

So far from what I can tell of this book, it's immensely entertaining and keeps you on your toes. I love that there are cliffhangers around every corner. Definitely an author to keep your eye out for.

Perfect story.

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Another banger from the talented Izzy!!

What can I say? I just love this author's work. Do not take this college romance as a cliche. It is a fast-paced novel (Which I love) and includes a notorious bad-boy. However, as we come to know him, he's softer around the edges for our heroine and I am hoping that he changes his ways for her.

I am team Ace!

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Our worst fears realized

Wasn't sure what to expect from this book but don't regret reading at all. Definitely something intended for a specific audience and very few may realise the brilliance in it.

It was truly depraved and realistic. The author made the characters (good and bad) jump off the page and made me feel like I was in the room, going through every traumatic experience.

Even with just four chapters, there were plenty of twists and turns and development between protagonists and antagonists. Grammer was actually spot on and this work should be traditionally published one day. It's that good.

Can't wait to read more and find out what trials and tribulations await our main cast.

10/10

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Not a fan of BTS butttt.....

Okay. As the title suggested I have NEVER listened to anything by BTS. Never have really heard of them but wow. This book left me with so many emotions. It checked off all my boxes with how a traditional Wattpad book should be filled with multiple POV's, crushes, and plenty of jealous haters.

The main character just focused on herself (Which is admirable) trying to make it through this place while it seemed people ridiculed her for being liked by the all famous band. Then when all seemed lost our love interest made us swoon with his caring ways.

So happy this ended with an HEA and was so fulfilling. Hope to have more stories like this in the near future. Good job author.

10/10

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Finally something different

Wasn't sure what to expect from this book but definitely was not this. The Bride of Lord Motte offers not only hints of humor and romance but a mild gothic feel that immediately draws you in. Authors like this are indeed unique and are worth taking a chance on.

The grammar was great as well as pacing and plot. Kept me on the edge of my seat yearning for more. There isn't a lot to say seeing as its still ongoing but hope this writer keeps chugging on.

10/10

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What a read!!

Okay. First off, this book had me stirring in so many emotions. Our MC and her mother have been dealt a shit hand in life. Fr. The story did a good job illustrating how messed up dynamics can be in the mafia underground and how women play second to a man's fiddle. Truly sad but all-encompassing.

Second... Lucian had me swooning all over. It's clear he cares for our MC but just doesn't know how to go about things considering he is derived from the very same world she is. The plot is amazing as well as character interaction and development.

Can see the grammar and spelling weren't perfect but those mistakes were few and far between so didn't see the point in marking down stars for that. We all have to start somewhere and honestly the writing (With improvement) could be top notch.

Well done, author!!

10/10

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Team #Rasher

Okayyyyyy. Maybe this ship name for Rose and Asher is cringy but I'm loving them so much so judge away haha.

Anyway. Where to begin, where to begin. I am a total sucker for instalove involving paranormal creatures. Wasn't sure what to expect but this book proceeded all expectations. Give me a vampire chick that isn't afraid to wear the pants and an alpha that is unsure of himself? Holy moly am I in love.

Don't wanna spoil much in this review for others that haven't read except for the fact this is the only romance book where I condone cheating and Asher needs to dump the anchor dragging him down!!

But as for the writing style and development, it was amazing. Author... don't ever stop writing with the same enthusiasm. Could feel how much fun you had writing this and the MC's emotions and personalities literally jumped off the page.

Everything about Blood On The Moon was so unique and hope to see more development in both plot and characters.

10/10

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What a unique take 😍

First I want to take a moment and say that if anyone is thinking of starting this book, definitely give it a chance and do not look at the reviews.

It's one thing to give constructive criticism and another to be unnecessarily rude trying to act like you're being helpful.

Now back to it, this had quite the unique storyline. Started off normal making me think of any other family drama plot, but then it took turns I didn't expect.

It did grow confusing at times when I wasn't sure what was happening next but I can see its better for the story to flow fast. It'll just take more practice to perfect this.

All in all, can't wait finish. Good job author 💯

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If Fifty Shades went in the other direction 😀

As the caption suggest... could this an alternate universe? Is this the next Christian Grey?

The book starts off wonderfully drawing us into our main characters and instead of making our female lead just be with a rich guy, she works for him.

Reminded me a lot of 50 shades and made me think; what if things happened this way? Because Ana almost worked for Christian though it never happened.

This will be one to look out for and cant wait for more.

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Of course it's brilliant!!

So glad someone on this app decided to continue the series with Harry's children. Not much going on yet but soon as I read the synopsis, I knew I had to give it go. Please write more author 💟💟

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How terrifyingly brilliant!

What a great read.

Something I am most scared of happening? Losing my memory and with no idea how to start figuring anything out. This book hit all those worst fears and built on it leaving readers hopeful on what's to come next.

Reactions from characters were believable and found myself wanting more out of their stories. Hope there's more to this book and can't wait for updates.

10/10 recommend.

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HOLY WOWZA!! So serious I think I may go crazy :(

So, first and foremost, this author knows how to write. Didn't know what to expect going into this but it exceeded all expectations. The title sweet sixteen perfectly defines what the book entails from start to finish, though it isn't some perfect love or summer fling gone right.

There were so misunderstandings between our love interests and children that it made me want to honestly beat the screen of my laptop-- but that is good because this book does get you that invested. Then when we threw in the fact that our hunk of the story is clearly moving on physically and somewhat emotionally it makes me want to cry. Really, how many of us knew we were destined for someone only for life to get in the way?

All in all, it was a great read. Despite when people have dialogue, it would have been easier to have quotations, I didn't think it was enough to rate 4 stars. I don't mind things like that.

Way to go author.

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Another banger as always ❤❤

Still in the process of reading but I am astounded at how well Izzy does her craft 😄 Never misses a mark with new adult books and somehow manages to keep in time with the 2010 bad boy aesthetic.

This book definitely reminds me of After and makes me want to just turn the page. Keep on writing Author!!!

10/10

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What a twist on common real world issues.

Okay. Have to be honest; when I saw the title of the book I grew excited. The remake show of DYNASTY has my heart and was hoping this had some of the scenarios. It DID NOT disappoint. Tying in dysfunctional family dynamics with a bit of fantastical elements... it showed how good a writer can be.

This really should be professionally published. The grammer is very good and could not put it down. ❤❤ all 5 stars baby 💯💯

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So different and unique!!

HOLY WOWZA IS THIS BOOK UNIQUE. Wasn't sure what to expect when I began reading but it definitely wasn't this. Kept being surprised at every turn and there's always something the reader doesn't expect. Took me into the twilight zone with time jumps.

Only criticisms I can say for now is the book is fast paced (which isn't a bad thing, I think it would do extremely well on Wattpad) and the Grammer could be a bit polished but hey. Nothing is perfect.

Once I read on, It's clear this author is going places. Well done author!!

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Why must this beginning torture me so?? 😭😭

What a start to a book!! I need more more more!! 💗💗 besides some grammer issues the flow of it really isn't that bad. Need to know if these two friends get past this kissing issue because... GOALS 😭😭💗

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Sexy vamps for the win!!

I am a complete sucker for paranormal anything... Romance. Action. Whatever the case may be.

Fell in love with this duo.

With a mix of mystery and sexy erotic chapters it draws you in and captivates.

Plus the taboo nature of potential same sex romance.

Yes please.

This author will be big one day. I can tell.

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Need more gems like this

OMG.

Wasn't sure what to expect upon opening this book but was pleasantly surprised with mentions of demons and faes.

The action was non stop and gave me a feeling of True Blood or Immortal instruments.

Definitely was a unique take on paranormal romance and can't wait to finish.

Good on you author 💗💗

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Got me hooked

This first part really has me entranced. Brilliant hook and leaves me wanting more. Know it's been two years but here's to hoping the author will update.

Massive potential.

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Very unique

I like that this book went back to the olden times of courts and kings but used modern day slang. Was a refreshing read.

Hopefully Fauna and the blue eyed man get to explore some things and the sisters get to escape the hell they are in.

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What a captivating read

I'm still working on the book but it's such a dark and tragic tone to the genre. It keeps you on your toes and makes you shed some tears. Can't wait to read more from this author.

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How wonderful.

Fast paced story with just enough description that you still feel connected with the characters and plot. Definitely recommend.

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Pleasantly surprised

Was expecting a tame enemies to lovers trope but I was shocked to find that there was so much going on. Very engaging and can't wait to finish. Definitely needs more recognition.

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Started from Wattpad no we're here

Started reading your books on Wattpad and I am so glad you are getting so many reviews here!! This book was very entertaining and I hope you publish these professionally one day.

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