🦇BattyBerserker🦇

i don't know what the f*ck to put here anymore...heckin REEEEEE madudes

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Enthralling

i absolutely adore your writing style, it keeps the reader going and wanting to read more! your wording is in some places sophisticated and it adds to the flavor of the story. i look forward to continuing to read the story, and see where the plot line leads us as readers!!!

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Great Story

I will use my power of honesty and say that it is very good, but maybe make it a little longer and add some details. But other than that you are doing great! I am diffidently going to read more!

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Very Descriptive!

I love the direction this story is taking!! I like how you seem to have your own writing style, it just seems to stick out to me. I also like your use of words and how descriptive you are. It helps the reader picture what is happening and what it all looks like which makes the story more enjoyable. Especially for those who read to escape from our reality and into the writing itself!

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