A dangerous and dark protagonist
This is a dark story of court intrigue and forced pairings in an empire of vampires. The main protagonist Amelia is edgy and angry, but we don't quite yet know why (I'm only up to chapter 5). She's a vicious killer who doesn't want to be "mated". There is a searing, immediate attraction and denial.
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Great start! I was totally vested and wanted to know more. Both Amelia and her soon-to-be-mate(?) are on the unlikeable side, which was kind of fun to read through because you're hoping for some sort of redemption, or a backstory explanation. I've always had a love of antiheroes.
I look forward to reading more!
I understand, as you said, that this has not yet been edited, so it wouldn't be fair for me to dock you on grammar/punctuation. Totally normal to edit later. I tend to edit chapter by chapter, we all do it differently!