BecomeTheGifted

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Very Cliche

I'm not sure if you are familiar with it, but the TV show Fringe was a lot like the story you are describing so far. In fact this idea is used a lot in sci-fi culture. However, I don't want to be a snob and just criticize your idea, because as an author I understand the value an idea can have. My recommendation would be that as this book progresses, that you try to depart from the cliche sci-fi scenes. Do something that would be considered insane to the genre. It's okay to have a common idea, as long as the plot is unique from norm.

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