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Super cute!

That was a super cute start!! I loved Claire! I love that her personality was so distinct! She’s confident and feisty!
Your descriptions were well done. Set the wedding atmosphere so nicely!
I mostly appreciate how realistic the dialogue was though.
I could totally see that conversation happening in real life! Plus, Paul sounds like a total hottie with a big heart! Wife, kids, then sailing??! Sign me up.
Totally loved that last pirate line, too.
It fit well with the running theme in this chapter with the kraken tattoo and the sailing!
Can’t wait to read more!

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AMAZING!

Oh my god. This was fantastic!! Why is it over???!! I need more of this in my life?? What a fantastically unique premise! I absolutely adore this!! So,I live for supernatural romance, but recently I’ve become bored with the same old story line. I want to read about what happens after they fall in love and need to overcome obstacles. This did it for me!! There were some typos, a bit of grammar errors here and there, but so easily overlooked when reading this amazingness! Please, please write more!

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