Ali

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Love is a slow burn

Your furst three chapters seem ro have this eerie vibe to it. Its a really good first impression, and the way you incorporate your descriprions are really affective. It really feels like im there in the book. I'll definitely read further!

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The bootlegger's daughter

It's a different perspective of writing. But it really fits the story! You get to know alot about the character in the first two chapters, and about her relatives. It's not boring, which is good. It's a nice little start for the story! The way the second chapter ends brings alot of mystery. Only thing that really let it down much the excessive talking about herself in chapter one. Maybe it was a prologue I forgot. But it didnt feel like a chapter. It felt like a get to know you. Would love if you could slowly ease this into the story!

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