Black_Hole

Cosmos

Just a black hole trying to understand this strange world.

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Loved The drama!

This is a great read with a lot of drama and humor in it. Also, Aakanksha is also so down to earth and lovely indeed. I loved the story and the sudden breakup that came.

The only thing I will suggest is to give a bit of clarity on who said what. Because I got confused many times. I think mentioning who said what at some places will be really helpful and also I think that the last two chapters were written in a hurry? because some quotation marks were missing. Just some small fixes and this novel will become perfect in every way.

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Amazing!

This was a great evening read with lots of drama to keep the interest. I really like your writing style and the way you portray emotions, it helps paint a better picture in the canvas. I hope the best or this book.

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Definitely a great read for a great evening.

This was definitely an interesting ride of emotions. I really love your writing style. I look forward to reading this book once again when it is completed.

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Really loved the story

I really hope for the completion of this book it is a great read. I would recommend it to everyone.

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Preserved in Ink

I am in awe of your writing style it really helps to imagine everything that's going on in the book.
I would recommend it to everyone.

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Complexity

I loved the characters and their personalities. It is intriguing to read this book. I hope the author completes the story.

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A very intriguing read

The story is very intriguing and interesting to read. I would recommend this book to my friends. It's a great read. I love it.

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Loved the realistic feel

I really liked the idea of a person finding the journal of a serial killer! The story seems real and pulls you in the plot. It feels as if it could be based on real events and that's what makes it so good. The fact that this kind of thing can also happen with you!

So far not many grammatical mistakes found. The story was good and the idea was fantastic as well. Would love to see how it ends.

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Interesting, kept me reading

Starting of this story is really interesting and I really liked the description of the character. For just two chapters this story really is pretty awesome. I really wish now that the author completes this story because every chapter leaves you at a cliffhanger to thrive for more.

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It has a lot of potential in it

This makes for a great evening read with some coffee. I really do think that your book has a lot more potential in it. I like your writing style, helps paint the canvas into my mind.

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