Ambrose Blackadr

Sacramento, California

[15] [I found the love of my life, thank you, world, she is perfect.] [Fav Colour: Dark Green and Black] I will read any story or poem. I like to write poems with my sisters and cousin.

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Wow. A few mistakes, but overall perfect.

Heya. Itโ€™s me. (Duh who else can it be?) I really like the book, a few grammar and punctuation errors, but if you need a better reader, I can give you a link to Mimicโ€™s profile, aka my cousin, who does a whole pile of stories and stuff. And she likes reading. I really like your style, itโ€™s really great. Not too much, but I get enough. Like, um, (how do i explain this???) I get good information, and dialogue, maybe I wish there was more on the page, (coz i fell in love witha hecking story yea!) but itโ€™s pretty much perfect. I love all the personality, and the detail. Itโ€™s oozing. I love it. Thank you!

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Heavy and undeniable

Wow. I must say, that was quite a story. I loved the parts where it was meaningful, and again, heavy, at the end it got kind of confusing, but it was undeniably wonderful. It just weighs down on your heart, and flips it over. You think about it in a whole other way. It was extremely heavy, but needed some balance. And we found some. In the conversations between the two where light and amusing. All in all, pretty prefect.

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