Breywar

My name is Brey. I self published a novel at 13 sold like 50 copies and retired. I’m a Chiefs fan, a professional reviewer, and mommy to an 8 year old shih tzu/pug mix.

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This. Was. Insane. I loved it!

This is one of those read that you think you know how it’s going to end, and you’re kind of right, but you’re still shocked because you’re completely wrong at the same time. The tension is a slow snowball build up that I loved! The scenes where you start to have everything pieces together for you was done very well. The writing was addicting, the overall plot drew me in from page one! The epilogue was absolutely mind blowing. I loved every second of this read! Easy to read, a quick read. I want more of this!

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Very interesting!

Bitch: Transformation is a very interesting read. It’s very short and action packed for the most part. There’s still a lot of the story that I don’t understand, but I’m hoping there will be a follow up to fill in the gaps and missing pieces. The writing style is very different in a good way. It was super different than anything I’ve read before. Nothing is handed to you and I enjoyed that aspect.

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Exciting!

This reminds of me a better version of the Uglies: the uglies was one of my favorite books going up, and I absolutely am hooked! I need you to write more now! Your writing is exceptional! I’m super impressed and I can’t wait to keep reading!

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This was short and intriguing!

I really liked this concept for a full length novel! It was a story told exclusively through dialogue, and it was told very well! The grammar was on point! I really like this!

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Really good!

This was super good! I was addicted from beginning to end! And yes I want you to write the scene that was described! There was some awkward wording and punctuation, easy fix! But I really liked this! I don’t read a lot of “Bonnie and Clyde” type novels, so this was super different for me, but I loved it!

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