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Refreshing!
What a pleasure to read such a well-structured and written story. You have created a wonderful cast of characters, which I want to know about. The dialogue is excellent and the flow of the interaction between characters is well paced. The story has a good rhythm and drives the reader to want to read on -- to find out what happens next. I thought your style of limiting description but more focus on character interaction was suitable for this type of story. This very similar to my own style of writing, so I found it very easy to read. I hope you have great success with this and future books.
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