Browneyes730

No published stories yet

Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

My Review on Gifted Sentiments

You have to love Kaiba's arrogance. Lol.
Although, not very many eighteen-year-olds act and speak the way Kaiba does. But he has Anzu to complement him and he does enjoy being with her. His interactions with Anzu make the story very warm and fuzzy. :)
I loved reading your story.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Pragmatic Proposal- My Review

Hey! I've reread your story and I still love it.

I found funny the part where Duke has Narnia...Lol.

I also like the part where Anzu asks herself what she has at the end of the day. The same question she asked Kaiba years ago in front of Pegasus' castle. And their answers are so different. Kaiba has always known what he's wanted. He had everything he needed back then. And she? She's lost... and because of that she has nothing.

I like it. :)

Read the story now

No badges received yet

About Us:

Inkitt is the world’s first reader-powered book publisher, offering an online community for talented authors and book lovers. Write captivating stories, read enchanting novels, and we’ll publish the books you love the most based on crowd wisdom.