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This is a good

This version is suggesting a shame and self hating while struggling with something you can not control. Jeremy is some what cruel but realistic for a teenager dealing with a mentally ill parent and Brianna is more empathetic and an emotional anchor

This is a good

I have read both. He faces a desperate attempt to taste something and to feel something real only to discover he is trapped in a cycle of emptiness. He is seeking something tangible in a dream.