CHarding1984

Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

WOW

This book surprised me from the beginning and just kept getting better. I love the characters and how you've developed them. It just makes me want to know more. There are some grammar and punctuation issues but I barely noticed them since the story itself was so good.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Really great

I loved the story. I hadn't planned on reading it all the way through when I started but was quickly drawn in wanting to know what happened. The only problems that I encountered was that it was hard to distinguish the characters. I felt like there were only about 5 characters instead of the 15 or so that I think it says and conversations could get confusing when I tried to figure out who said what. Also, the passage of time isn't clear. Either way, it was a great read and I would love to read more.

Read the story now

No reading lists yet

No badges received yet

About Us

Inkitt is the world’s first reader-powered publisher, providing a platform to discover hidden talents and turn them into globally successful authors. Write captivating stories, read enchanting novels, and we’ll publish the books our readers love most on our sister app, GALATEA and other formats.