With Love, Carrie.

Another winner!!!

Only good things to say!! Loved all the twists and turns, a good steady pace flowed you right to the very end. Grammar and spelling errors were minimal and made for an easy enjoyable read! Cannot wait to read more from this writer.

You have much to be proud of!

needs work

Sounds to me like English isn't you're first language. So writing is a great way to expand that. I'd also recommending you read. read tons! read all genres of books. it will help you understand better sentence structure, word placement, grammar. story is interesting but needs a better hook.

good luck, let me know if I can help.

Erotic Perfection!

The right plan lance of hot erotica and great plot line. Characters are well developed and you only get the information you need. It’s not over dramatic in anyway but that makes for an enjoyable read. It’s also HOT HOT HOT! Very good job.

Fabulous !

I really love the display of cat and mouse, like a real world relationship has! Keep up the good writing!!

Cannot get enough!

Fabulous ending to a well rounded book! Excellent grammar, character development and plot twists. Can’t wait to read more of your work.

Total winner !!

Great character development, excellent grammar and good solid hook! Can’t wait to read more.