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Really liked it

I enjoyed this story a lot, I had read it before on FanFiction but this version is longer and I think I like it even more. I'm not usually a fan of O/Cs but I found myself really interested in Commander Holmes - complex character, a bit like Hotch but I like to think he'll get his happy ending too.

I liked the prologue for an insight in to the killer's mind, something that wasn't really there in the original. That being said, I loved both versions.

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