Caylie Hart

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So sweet!

Aw! So darn cute and sweet! I caught a few grammar mistakes, but outside of that it was very adorable. It was a refreshing twist on the usual high school AU PJO fanfictions. The whole story was very captivating and it could actually make you feel as if you were there, in the scenes with the characters. I think what made me keep reading was, well, the plot. It was enticing and could really capture you.

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Pretty Good

The plot sounds good, and I hope that the writing style is enticing and really draws in readers, including me. Plus, who would ever have thought about making Firestar have more than one sibling?! Overall, it sounds very interesting, and I hope you post the first chapter soon.

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