Chaotic Soul

Bibliophile!✨😍 Binge-watcher!❤️ Hopeless romantic!💯 Check out my stories if you love romance and erotica!❤️

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Beautiful

Such beautiful words that made me emotional. Keep writing such poems 😍❤️

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Intriguing

Great start and I could feel myself wanting to read more. It's has an interesting plot with a lot of potential. Please do update soon. You are doing amazing for your first book!❤️❤️

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Great

Love the description and the plot.... everything is detailed not too much or too less...the perfect amount and it's nice to see the author building up the story instead of rushing it....love to read more... please do update...❤️

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Great begining

Great start and seems refreshing..can't wait to read more and please do update soon

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The best book I've read recently

Okay, I just love this book from the top till bottom. This was an amazing read and I could feel the characters pulling me in. I was like the perfect story with a mix of happiness, sadness, pain, love, friendship, violence. You touched everything to the right amount and it was indeed a rollercoaster ride. You know how to pull the readers with your writing and I enjoyed it thoroughly. I made my heart ache to have a guy like Gavin and a kid like Logan. This book touched my heart in a personal level and I'm sure it will be close to my heart. Thanks alot for giving me a chance to read it. I'm really happy I chose this book to read. You rock, girl! Keep up the good work and bring in more books.

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Great plot

I love the flow of the book and the plot and descriptions are really good.. I would suggest you to focus on grammar and avoid texting slang.. I noticed you have forgotten commas at certain places...it happens to everyone..no issues...you have got great potential...love to see more of your work...do update soon...❤️❤️

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Intriguing

I think the plot is great and you have potential....try using grammarly and please do avoid using texting language...I noticed you have used 'u' 'n'... with a little bit of editing I think you are good to go....keep writing more...😊😊

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Intriguing

It's very good and intresting... although I think you could work on the dialogue part a bit better...I personally found it kinda confusing...but the plot and idea is amazing!

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Interesting!!!

The story and the plot is absolutely good and refreshing. Really can't wait to read more. For a person who is new here, you are really talented. Although I did notice some punctuation and grammar mistakes silghtly, like you missed a comma her and there.... nothing that wasn't readable...overall impressive work..😊💯

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Good

I like the plot of the story. You could be a bit more descriptive of the main characters and avoid spelling mistakes. I use grammarly. It is really helpful. Apart from that, I loved your book. It is quite different ❤️

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Beautiful

The story and plot is amazing. I can relate so much to the way you write because it's similar to mine. I loved the way you take the story. I would suggest you to be a little bit more descriptive of the way you portray the characters and other than a few grammatical and spelling errors,it was beautiful. I couldn't stop myself from reading. Keep writing and you can definitely count me as your regular reader. 😊❤️

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Good Read

The writing is amazing and the story flows smoothly. Keep up your good work and looking forward for many more updates from you.

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Must Read!

The writing is so good and I felt it was neat and elegant. I got a dystopian feel while reading it. The characters and the description are really engaging. It made me want to read more. Looking forward to read more chapters. You are a brilliant writer.

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Good!

So far from what I have read, it is really good. The description is really well written and the female protagonist is given the right amount of importance and emotion. But it would have been nice to know why they were cruel to her. I hope it comes up in the future and there were few spelling mistakes here and there especially the word 'differant' it should have been different. Overall a good read and would love to read more chapters. Keep up the good work!!😊😊

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Good Stuff!!

I would like to be honest. The story was really good and the writing style is amazing. Everything is pretty good except for some grammar corrections here and there. Also I felt some terms to be new. It would be helpful if you could mention the meaning of it at the end of the chapters. Just a suggestion. You have a really good creative mind. Keep up the good work.

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Good but needs improvement

So I would like to be really honest with how I felt. I think you should work on your writing style. It seems like a narration more than a book. The dialogues could be highlighted within quotes. And the use of Smiley's and emojis could be avoided to get the asthesic feel of reading a book. Now on the bright side,I did love the plot and the story. The description is really good and engaging. So if you work on your writing style,you would gain alot of readers. Hope it was helpful!😊

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So good and engaging!❤️

I am personally a fan of werewolves and this book is my well written and kept me hooked. I loved the female protagonist point of view. I could relate alot with the story at work parts and the emotional bits were conveyed well. I would love to see more romance in the future and I love how well the character development is done instead of rushing it. Overall the book is amazing and I'm going to be a regular reader of yours. Please do update soon. Looking forward to it! You are an amazing writer and you have a bright future. Keep up the good work.❤️

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