Chaotic Soul

Beautiful

Such beautiful words that made me emotional. Keep writing such poems 😍❤️

Good

Good read😍😍

Intriguing

So far from what I have read, I seen immense potential in this story. It has a really fresh and unique plot and I absolutely love it. There is just one thing that you need to look into. The dialogues are a bit confusing and sometimes I get lost as to who is speaker..just focus on that and then you are good to go. All the bestdear❤️

Great begining

Great start and seems refreshing..can't wait to read more and please do update soon

The best book I've read recently

Okay, I just love this book from the top till bottom. This was an amazing read and I could feel the characters pulling me in. I was like the perfect story with a mix of happiness, sadness, pain, love, friendship, violence. You touched everything to the right amount and it was indeed a rollercoaster ride. You know how to pull the readers with your writing and I enjoyed it thoroughly. I made my heart ache to have a guy like Gavin and a kid like Logan. This book touched my heart in a personal level and I'm sure it will be close to my heart. Thanks alot for giving me a chance to read it. I'm really happy I chose this book to read. You rock, girl! Keep up the good work and bring in more books.

Intriguing

I think the plot is great and you have potential....try using grammarly and please do avoid using texting language...I noticed you have used 'u' 'n'... with a little bit of editing I think you are good to go....keep writing more...😊😊

Good

I like the plot of the story. You could be a bit more descriptive of the main characters and avoid spelling mistakes. I use grammarly. It is really helpful. Apart from that, I loved your book. It is quite different ❤️

Beautiful

The story and plot is amazing. I can relate so much to the way you write because it's similar to mine. I loved the way you take the story. I would suggest you to be a little bit more descriptive of the way you portray the characters and other than a few grammatical and spelling errors,it was beautiful. I couldn't stop myself from reading. Keep writing and you can definitely count me as your regular reader. 😊❤️

Good Read

The writing is amazing and the story flows smoothly. Keep up your good work and looking forward for many more updates from you.

Must Read!

The writing is so good and I felt it was neat and elegant. I got a dystopian feel while reading it. The characters and the description are really engaging. It made me want to read more. Looking forward to read more chapters. You are a brilliant writer.

Good!

So far from what I have read, it is really good. The description is really well written and the female protagonist is given the right amount of importance and emotion. But it would have been nice to know why they were cruel to her. I hope it comes up in the future and there were few spelling mistakes here and there especially the word 'differant' it should have been different. Overall a good read and would love to read more chapters. Keep up the good work!!😊😊

Interesting!!!

The story and the plot is absolutely good and refreshing. Really can't wait to read more. For a person who is new here, you are really talented. Although I did notice some punctuation and grammar mistakes silghtly, like you missed a comma her and there.... nothing that wasn't readable...overall impressive work..😊💯