Charles Arthur

England

I write things. // Charles Arthur is a pseudonym and persona. Writing style and any quirks are intentional.

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Entranced by a tick, tick, tick...

The mystery was what drew me in, and it was that same mystery that made me stay.

A peculiar gentleman finds a peculiar clock and through his growing rage, the readers interest grows. The use of suspense was just the right amount and did not become slow or boring, and as another reviewer commented, it does bear resemblence to Poe's 'The Raven'.

There was little error in grammar and spellings, other than you once wrote - by pure accident, of course - 'is' instead of 'it'.

A very interesting read, and I commend you on it!

- C.A.

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