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Moon rise

I really like your book and the plot seems to good in a right direction. I would advise you not get carried away with too much description. Some people are easily bored with describing too many things, they want the story. Otherwise it is a good book keep up the good work and it is intriguing. Oh also don't disclose too much information on your summary but your book is certainly intriguing

Great book

This is fantastic, you got me hooked

Great 😊👌

Nicely executed

Interesting

Great start but you need to work on writing style especially paragraphs. The story is intriguing and I love mythology. Keep up the hard work

When ocean calls

It is a great book but l wish the chapters were a bit longer. Other than that, great plot and keep up the good work

Interesting

I am always down for a good thriller and this one is an intriguing one. I love the plot, good work. Can't wait for more.

Great Read

At first I thought, let me read few chapters but now l am hooked. I love the plot and l am sad about all the struggles that Liam is going through but that just shows how great you are at writing. It is a great book

Interesting

Great plot. I love how Adelia is strong and the way Quinn has her back. It is an interesting story, l am looking forward to see how it goes. Poor thing, being on the run is not easy,

Interesting

This is a great story, l love the way you introduced it any the whole Japanese theme. I can't wait for more. So far it has me hooked can't wait to see where it goes

Interesting

It is an interesting story with a lot of potential, keep up the hard work writing is hard. I can't wait to read more

Interesting

It is interesting and your plot is good. Hoping for and keep up the good work.

Lovely

Seems promising, can't wait for more

Sudden passion

Great book and l fell in love with the characters

Lovely

I love the way the book was plotted and k think it's interesting