Chris_P

Great read

Looking forward to book 3

Great read

The more you write the better you get. Loved this story and can’t wait for the sequel.

Best one yet

This is one of your best. You’ve built out the characters so well and the feels are all there. Made me tear up with the Christmas stories and the littles. Your writing has grown so much. I love the laughter and banter between all the characters. Keep it up. I really don’t want this story to end.

Ended to quickly

Great book. Plot line was solid, characters were funny, and only a couple of grammar/spelling problems. As I commented before I would love for you to flesh out the characters more. Also build out the story a little. It sped by so fast I read this in no time and wanted more from all the characters. You’ve got the style down just need to learn to build out your story.

Short but Great

Interesting storyline. It’s short in chapters but they are long chapters. Love the concept of not accepting what you are told but asking questions and forming your own opinions. That’s something we need more of in our society today.

The Blind Witch

Awesome story! Jessica is an amazing writer with in-depth characters you really connect to. Love all of her works and can’t wait for more from her.

The First King

Oh wow. I put off reading this for a bit as it was a “prequel” to The Blind witch which I loved. Couldn’t get myself to think the prequel would be nearly as good but boy was I wrong. Still thinking about a break before I read the story of Nyx but then maybe not. I can’t figure out how you were able to write these backwards. Amazing story, amazing characters that make love then hate then love them again. Keep up the fantastic writing and never ever worry about how many words you are using. Then deeper you go into the characters the more you pull us in with you.

Fate of the Wolf

Loved the plot of this story. I wasn’t sure where it was going at first but the more I read the more interesting it got. Started feeling like a “5 people you meet” type of story and I found that very refreshing. You have a great ability to explain not only a setting but the characters emotions and thoughts. Well done. There were quite a few grammatical errors. I was able to figure them out but a good proof reading with a look at not just spelling but incomplete sentence or sentence structure would help. Overall a very good read and strong plot.

Saving Grace

Good story. Good plot. Great writing. Lots of grammatical errors that just need a solid proofreading. Most problematic error was getting some names wrong. Would’ve like to flesh out the characters some more and give more time for them to be together before everything goes nuts and then they jump into bed to make the falling for each other a little more believable. Overall though, it was a good story.

Fated

Seemed to end with no real substance. Eve should have had to learn how to use and control her powers on some level before there was any confrontation. Then the actual fight was a let down because it was too easy. But I did love that her wolf was the one to take her head. Writing was good except for a little rushing of the plot and few grammatical errors but easily overlooked. Just need some one to proof read for you.