ClarisseMcClellan451

Hmm....

I'm not really sure what to say... I will say this though, you're grammar's all over the place. It's not super bad -I've seen worse- but maybe go through and edit a little. This really wasn't my kinda thing... sorry.

The Haunting Daunt

Well it certainly has potential! You defiantly need to have paragraphs and you have a few other grammatical errors, but that's okay! I think that your plot has potential, but it's a little generic. Also it all feels a little rushed, I understand that you wrote it for a contest, so that's okay, but I recommend going through and editing.

All in all, not bad, but could use some work.

The Choosing

Wow! I was not expecting that ending! Very well done! Though I do have to point out that a thousand people is quite a lot, there are quite a few towns in Montana that have much less then a thousand people. Over all I really enjoyed reading The Choosing!

Icebergs

Very good! I like that he has a love for icebergs! I think you did a very good job with the part where he was in the bath. Also I like how this story gives you the P.O.V. of a mentally ill person. I would most definitely read this again!

Through the Windows

I really enjoyed reading Through the Windows! Very good! I highly recommend it. I think it ended very well.

Partners in arson

Really good story! The only thing that's wrong with it is you don't always use proper grammar and you use a few wrong words, you might try reading through you story and editing. Over all Really good! I don't want to spoil anything but, very emotionally griping. I mean I almost cried .

Amazing!

Wow, just wow! You are writing a truly amazing book. This is the best book I've read on inkitt and definitely in my top 10 favorite books of all time. I can't wait for more chapters to come out! You always leave a perfect cliffhanger at the end of each chapter making me need to read the next one. I loved everything about this book, the intrigue, the romance, and the flow of the story. My only criticism for you is that your tense is off sometimes but it doesn't distract from the story at all.

All in all 10 million out of 10. I highly recommend this book! I'm so sorry I didn't read this sooner because it is truly wonderful. Keep up the great writing and please for the love of Pete publish the next chapter!!!!!!! I need, need, NEED to know what happens next!

Wow!

I loved reading this book so so much! It was very freaky and had a lot of gore, but I love that kinda stuff. I loved the way you described everything, especially when she killed. Anastasia very much reminds me of something I would write, which is perhaps why I love it so much. The detail, the emotions, the world, you captured it all so well. This was is now one of my favorite books of all time, and defiantly the best book I've read on inkett!

Also I would like to apologize for not writing my review sooner, I was hoping you'd write more before I did. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Ummm....

I'm not sure what I just read, but I liked it. Keep going, I want to know what happens next!

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Not sure what to say. Not the worst poetry ever, keep up the good work

Amazing

I was, and still am, speechless after reading this. You did an amazing job!

Better then I thought

Let me start by saying I hate fantasy. It has never appealed to me. but I found you story to be a surprisingly good read. I didn't finish reading it as I don't like fantasy, but I can objectively admit from what I have read that your story was good. Your characters were well thought out and I really felt what they were going through. For being an 18+ romance/fantasy book (something I try and steer clear of) I was pleasantly surprised by how well written your story was.

So in short, a good story but not my thing.

What I think after reading chapters 1-3

Well I wasn't a fan, I'm sorry, I just wasn't. I was happy when I finally reached the 40th page.

Let me start by saying the description gave didn't describe the story, I was expecting something totally different. Or maybe I didn't reach that part in the story. Chapter 1 could (and should) be shortened down to a paragraph or 2. You pose interesting questions, but it goes on for too long. Chapter 2 and 3 aren't bad, but it's all very wordy, I had to force myself to keep reading because I didn't find it that interesting. You write like a conspiracy nut. Also your grammar needs some serious work, but that can be said for a lot of people, myself included.

All in all, not a story I would ever read more than I have to. Sorry if this review was mean. but at least you know it was honest.

Wind

Great job! This story stirred something deep inside me. You wrote a very eccentric story and executed it well. Even though it was only a few paragraphs long the story felt completed.

All in all, great job and keep writing!

Forgotten

Truly amazing! Reading this really made me think about what a weird, crazy and amazing life we all live. You wrote something amazing and I hope you know that. I highly recommend everyone reads this.

Amazing!

You did an amazing job with this story! I really enjoyed reading it! The only thing you did wrong was you put a few quotation marks when you didn't need to. Still, great job!

All in all, great read and I would highly recommend!

Depressed Souls

Okay, poems aren't really my thing, but I thought you did a good job. I like how most of them were really short, made it easy to read.

all in all I would defiantly read again

Good job!

Okay, let my start off by saying Harry Potter is not my thing at all, I watched the movies and didn't really like or pay much attention to them. It's just not my thing, but O.M.G. I think you did an amazing job with this book! There were a few things that I thought were confusing, but I think that's my lack of Harry Potter knowledge. A few grammar errors, but nothing that really took away too much from the story.

All in all great book, would read again!

Great start!

Wow, really great start! You defiantly paint a vivid picture with your writing. I can't wait to see where this story goes! My only problem is I don't think her having autism really adds much, I don't know if this changes later on though.

All in all, great start and I can't wait until it's finished! Keep writing!

Jed's Story

I really enjoyed reading this! I love the journal perspective! I think you did a great job captivating the reader as well! the only thing you need to change is in chapter 11 where you have paragraph split apart in the middle of sentences. Again I really enjoyed Jed's Story, I'm sorry that it took me so long to finally review a book of yours.

Soul Mate

I really enjoyed reading this, I just wish there was more! As usual you grammar could use some work, but that's okay. You certainly know how to captivate the reader! I really like how you used different P.O.V.'s. And I loved Maddy's escape plans, they were genius!

This is me

Very sad, but I feel like you should have added more aspects of your life.

Sooo good!

I really enjoyed reading this! These are some of the best poems that I have ever read! Keep writing.

A Field of Daisies

Really good so far, I can't wait till it's finished! I have the inkitt app now so I can write more, and I can bug you to write more too ; )