Ghazal

a desperate for love, with a dirty mind! 🇩🇪🇮🇷🇬🇧

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Unique

Great book..
Read the whole thing and fell in love with some characters as well as hating some *one actually*..

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LOVED IT

It literally killed me to wait for more updates every damn week but now that its complete, OTHERS CAN GO CRAZY OVER IT!

**I loved how unique the relationship between Alejandro and lyla was *-* GOOD JOB AUTHOR

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Nice idea

I luv the idea behind the book

But thats probably the only thing that i like about this book..🤷🏻‍♀️

Sorry but..

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ABSOLUTELY AMAZING

ABSOLUTELY IN LOVE WITH THIS PLOTLINE

Though i wish the chapters were uploaded more frequently CUZ I CANT FUCKING WAIT!!

SOOOOOOOO DAMN UNDERRATED (just like my book😎 LOL, Cocky much?!😂☠)

Anyyyyyywayyyyyys, i hope it gets a better, more loyal audience and BAM!💥🎉

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😩🖤💛😩

Holy fucking shit!
This book is MORE THAN AMAZING
Im fucking speechless!!

It has humor, romance, dominance, feminism, nice sexy scenes and a lot more..🤯🖤

I fucking loved it!
Didn't involve too much unnecessary drama which is good
And DAMNNNNNN I LIKED IT
No scratch that
I LOVED IT

If you liked my book.. youll love this one..
I totally recommend it!🖤☠💛

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🤷🏻‍♀️

Too many grammar errors but nothing too hard to figure out at the end..

WAS DEFINITELY NOT AN EROTICA AS I ANTICIPATED

The story was also nothing too special and kinda sounded like some of those high school stories when it came to the way her colleagues treated her..

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Love it

Love the book
Wish the updates were more rapid though
N alsooooooooooooo
When tf is she gonna get over that Adam guy??😭😑
Its fucking exhausting
Plzzzzzzzz make it happen faster..
😭

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOOOOOOOOVE THE BOOK

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😍😌😍

A good read during quarantine..

The humor was definitely there and it also involved a little bit of romance ^-^

Nice job;)

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Love it

Absolutely loved this book
I wish to see what happens next more than anything because ive been looking for a book like this for a long while and now that ive found it, i can not wait to drown myself in it!

Note to the author:
I feel like belle is too submissive and grayson is too domineering which i find it annoying from time to time..
I guess i wished that she was more like Liz in my own book

Soooooo
Guess what im trying to say is..
I would love her to act like the Luna that she is destined to be..

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Poisonous Greed

I just cant decipher on how i feel about this book..
I did like it, but it didn't make any sense to me..
Like, everyone was in love even though they shouldn't have and it was hard to me to understand..

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🤦🏻‍♀️😓🤦🏻‍♀️

Its just so damn dirty and vulgar which im fine with..
But the idea behind the way things go around in their world is just disgusting to me and i cant just stand it..

It just presents women as servants to men's pleasures and is trying to make it look romantic which i believe is ANYTHING BUT ROMANTIC OR WHATEVER..
The idea/plot just bothers me to no end..😓

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Amazing story

I would love to know what happens next! But so far, so good..

P.s: i DO NOT WANT HER TO EVEN MEET HER MATE AGAIN.. I FUCKING HATE THAT IDIOT AND WISH THEIR MATE BOND WOULD JUST VANISH OR STH, which i doubt based on wt that guy said🙄
But still..! A girl can dream!

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FRUSTRATED AND CURIOUS

Im sooooooo mad at the fact that this story hasnt been uploaded for over 8 months and the story is COMPLETLEY INCOMPLETE!!!😤🤧😤🤧😤🤧😤🤧😤🤧😤

FINISH THE STORYYYYYYYYYYY PLZZZZZ🤦🏻‍♀️😐💔

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A great storyline

It was a little confusing cause i couldn't get some paragraphs at all and this story needs a heavy job on editing
But i liked the story line and the things that happened so far

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Not a dark romance

It wasnt a dark story, i expected so many disturbing things that you can easily find in stories but it had none.

There were some things like the time he handcuffed her to the bed and left her there for two weeks, but it just passed so easily and without any kinda problem that made me reconsider even reading the rest of the story.

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YAAAAAS MASON😍🤣

I dont know why but i feel like i should give 4 stars for this one and also should've given 4stars for one night too
But youve done so much and i really appreciate it so i went for 5.

This one was just like one night and i loved it just the same
But the Levi part was a little bit too much and weird i dont know what to think about it all!!

Reviewed to tell you to keep up the good work and hopefully lighten un ur mood somehow!( i know how bad it hurts to not get reviews and shit!!)

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😥🧡

I loved it😍
Thats all i can say:)

The fact that she adopted drew was amazing but i could see it coming, however, i thought it would be with Wayne and they would do it both but the fact that she adopted him all alone took me off guard and made me LOVE this story even moooooooooòoooooooooooooooooooooore*-*

LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT.🤧🧡

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🤕🧡

It was AMAZIIIIIING🤩🤧☠

I dont read the books in inkitt when they get longer than 150 (which i have no idea how they calculate) or so on and leave the book unfinished, or let it go when the drama gets too much, but THIS BOOK, i read it TILL THE FUCKING LAST WORD.

I gotta admit that it was too long and the longest book that ive finished on inkitt, but it was GREAT.

I spent a day and a half reading it instead of studying my ass off and am a little guilty though.🤧💔🤓

P.s: i really like mafia stories and shit, i think i need to start going to therapy. 😂🤕

Oh, but i have a criticism too, and that is: the book irritated my feminist mind so much and i wish that it was a little more feminine-supporting?!

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Roman's daddy for sure🤣😍

I really liked the fact that Roman/John was not one of those who treats the other main character like shit! He was nice, but also had some sort of gangsta vibe too, so it was both heartwarming for me and sexy.

I've been so caught up with Fantasy genre that i didn't think i would like a story about two simple human beings!!
But it caught me off guard for real!

Oh, and i have always found myself drawn to the whole gangster stuff that after reading this, it reminded me of the fact that i need to check up on my therapist and find out what the heck is wrong with me..!!🤦🏻‍♀️😂

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