Clever_Little_Elf

Hey! I'm the Clever Little Elf, welcome to my lair of nerdiness...

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Nice One-Shot!

I find the concept of this extremely interesting. I could totally see this as a story a mother would read to her child to get them to sleep. It's fanciful and sweet, I really like it. I'm not usually a fan of present tense in stories, but I did like it in this one.

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Love the Concept

To be honest, I really like this concept! I'm honestly really shocked that this hasn't gotten more reviews. As someone that has to go (unwillingly) to church every day, I find this absolutely hilarious. I love the part when Satan exclaims, "Christ almighty!" and Daniel responds with, "You sure you can say that? Won't God strike you down?" I burst out laughing with Lucifer's retort because I was thinking of it in my head.

'What's he going to do, send me to Hell?'

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