Will be reading the next chapters too
Perfect mix of darker-ish themes, beautiful visuals / gore-ish visuals, poetic writing, the metaphors and just all the emotions you make me feel through all of the above
Read the story now
I really want to see this one through, no pressure there
You've mistaken 'then' for 'than'
And other than that little grammar mistake, I really cant find anything wrong with this story.At all.
A personal favorite moment of mine so far, is the description of the tree in chapter 2, the tree itself, the leaves, the irony of the whole thing with the carved heart and initials in the trunk of it..
Scratch that, theres no favorite moments, all of it is favorite moments
The scenery, the bodies, 'why has god forsaken us', the hunters, the writing.I love all of the utter desperation, destruction, gloominess, uncertainty and overall awfulness going on for these guys
Can't wait to see what will follow! Would love to see more on how these people are living