Hanako Iwata

Good job

You did good. The characters were interesting but I do have to say that it was a bit bland. It was funny and not too serious, however, it was all so planned out that there was no real twists to keep it from being too rigid. I do like the story and the happy ending. Good job.

Great

The plot was interesting and it was well written. The writing style was amazing and the first scene was very fascinating!

Cute

The story line is cute with all these Disney movies coming together. I love that you kept the characteristics of each character how they are portrayed in the movies. I’m not too big into fanfics but this was cute and amusing.

Great work

I loved how strong Aria is and the mention of two alphas not being allowed to mate. I want to know more of why Ryan’s presence seems so important and why he made Aria a little woozy in the beginning. So far I love the story, keep it up!

Keep it up

The way the story is portrayed is realistic and utterly relatable. Thanks for writing it, hope you keep going.

Great

I like the point of view you picked. I hope everything works out for Boris and the team.

Loved it

A very put together story. I loved the character development and how the story pulled on the heart strings. Overall I liked it

Very well developed

I enjoyed the humor laced in with the story and the relatability to the main character. Overall I enjoyed the story and look forward to reading the next one.