WeldingWater78

Okay I’m going to make this short and blunt. I’m smart and I write. Read what you like, comment on my stuff.

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Wonderful

Love how the different points of view are shown to shed light on how different people interpret situations differently. Only a few grammar errors but I don’t care. I really enjoyed all aspects of this book especially the raw emotions. Good job!!!

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Great work

I loved how strong Aria is and the mention of two alphas not being allowed to mate. I want to know more of why Ryan’s presence seems so important and why he made Aria a little woozy in the beginning. So far I love the story, keep it up!

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Keep it up

The way the story is portrayed is realistic and utterly relatable. Thanks for writing it, hope you keep going.

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Unique

You have an incredible vocabulary!! I loved it though I had to look up some of the words to understand.

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Excellent

I like the clarity of the storytelling and introduction of the characters. There were few grammar errors and the perception of this world is unique to the character adding a personal touch.
I wish there was a bit more emotion to bring the reader feel closer to the characters, although I’m sure it will develop through the chapters. Overall I love it so far.

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Great

I like the point of view you picked. I hope everything works out for Boris and the team.

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Loved it

A very put together story. I loved the character development and how the story pulled on the heart strings. Overall I liked it

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Very well developed

I enjoyed the humor laced in with the story and the relatability to the main character. Overall I enjoyed the story and look forward to reading the next one.

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