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Coraidhe
London/Bucharest
Strong emotions
This story is very touching. I must give all the credit to the author for the power to make a reader to experience a cascade of emotions as going deeper into the chapters. All I can hope is that this book will be finished, so I can read it all, because it left me wanting to know what happends next.
Very good story!
Amazing story!
I don't know what to say, except that this story is so captivating that I can't put it down!
Read the story nowGreat read!
This is a lovely story. I hope that the author will edit the text in the future, but overall this is a must read!
Read the story nowA very good read!
I must know more!
This story is enticing and amazing, I love the way the author describe the characters and the settings;
it's captivating, it's funny and it's serious in the same time!
I would love to read more once the chapters are uploaded, it's definitely got my attention.
Great reading! Congratulations to the writer!
Note: as English is not my first language, I didn't really noticed any grammar errors.
Something nice
I find this story sweet. Very good to read when in bed, because then you can fall asleep with a smile on your face. Congratulations to the wonderful author!
Read the story nowA story with potential
I rated this story overall with four stars out of five because there are many things you can improve. As your first book -is very good, but try not to rush it and be careful with the flow of the actions and events.
The writing style can be improved as well, try to reduce the "-ing" and some repetition, like the v neck line, which appears too much.
You could add a better description of the characters' internal struggles, so the reader could understand them better..
Remember always that i can understand only what you write, not what you picture. Gestures are important, many times a simple one can tell a lot about a character.
I hope this helps, as we learn and grow as writers- our fictional worlds grow with us.
Nevertheless, I would recommend your story and I enjoyed reading it.
Keep up the good work !
Amazing story
This story has the salt and pepper. Once you start it, it keeps you engaged till the point you find yourself into the characters' skin. Easy to follow, the smooth flow takes a reader to another dimension and keeps him there, in the dynamic of the book's world.
Congratulations!
Simply captivating!
It seems to me that anything I would say it wouldn't do justice to the beauty of this story.
From the introduction I was captivated by the layers of mystery that paints the characters' world, and amazed of the descriptions that accentuate the feelings and the suspense.
Very good story!
Good internal struggle focus, good flow of the story
I love how the author is building the world of this book, and focus also on the internal problems of the wife, and her struggles living with a war traumatised man. I like the details and descriptions but i think a bit more could be added. Per total, this story attracts and impress! Good job!
Read the story nowDifferent
Not the typical werewolf story. The details are connected and full of meaning, developing a story beyond the story. The connections are easy to miss, but once you spot them, they add heaviness to the plot.
Different style, very good plot!
