Cosey Josey

Antwerp

"I write for the same reason I breathe - Because if I didn't, I would die." - Isaac Asimov

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Beautiful!

First of all, you have a very unique and enchanting way of describing things as well as scenes. I personally am a big fan of that!
I never had the feeling like your story was going to fast, although more than a year flew by. I think you made the right choice in not lingering when it wasn't necessary, but taking just the right amount of time to illustrate how strong her feelings were. I also like that you used seasons and not months to describe this :)
Also, I really like your take on vampires, instead of going for the stereotypical approach, you were able to present us with a perspective I honestly can say I've never seen before, for example how he is capable of granting other people these special powers.
I loved it!

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Black Hollow

I love how you describe things in a different way, such as orbs instead of eyes and the vines acting as thieves in the night! I think your style is unique and at the same time extremely suiting for this kind of story and setting.
I really appreciated how the first impression of the female character is quite sassy and confident, even for this time frame.
It's very intriguing, the first paragraphs tend to draw you in immediately, wondering what secrets you'll uncover when you continue. Definitely worth reading!

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Unexpected!

At first I didn't read your story, because I was thinking it would be a collection of short stories due to the small number of chapters. But when I started reading, I couldn't stop! I may be a little biased since I met my husband online ๐Ÿ˜‰ but still, your writing was flawless, the story was sexy and entertaining, not too long or anything, but still enough background to make it a wonderful love story!

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Awwwww!

Beautiful romantic story! You had the right amount of conversations, thoughts and descriptions to create a fluent story! Great job!

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Lovely!

First of, I couldn't agree more with your final note! ๐Ÿ˜‚
About the story: I seriously felt for both the main characters! I often wanted to knock their heads together so their pieces would fall into place ๐Ÿ˜ But I loved their story, their relationship, everything about them, especially the fact that they were different than other people โ˜บ๏ธ

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Beautiful!

Proved a story doesn't have to be extremely long to be beautiful ๐Ÿ˜ I was actually surprised how everything turned out, because you didn't give away too much information at the beginning, which I like ๐Ÿ˜ your writing is impeccable!

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Loved it!

Another great story! I liked that there was such an intriguing background behind her story, it ended their romance on such a thrilling note ๐Ÿ™Š How you describe their attraction is just amazing and the hot scenes were exactly that-HOT!

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Awesome!

This has to be one of my favorite werewolf stories!!!
The story is thrilling, with a bunch of unexpected although realistic events.
The characters and relationships between them are so lifelike, I felt like I really got to know them while reading. You're an amazing writer!

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Definitely potential!

I think it's such a wonderful idea to spend some stories on the topics for women you mention. I definitely like reading about those, because they are always an eye opener to me.
However, I do think you could use some grammar reflection and some extra time to optimize your punctuation, for example, there are often comma's missing and your 'i's should be in capitals when speaking in the first person.
I did like the other language aspect, because it gives the story an authentic feel.
Please keep on writing, because I'd love to read your opinions on other matters as well!

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Amazing!

I was intrigued by the summary and you did not disappoint! I loved that it's about a beautiful girl, no matter what size she is, and I definitely believe there should be more guys like Axel, teaching girls that their worth is not in their weight but in their strength and personality โ˜บ๏ธ So glad to have read this story!!!

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Beautiful :)

Loved this story! It was so funny, witty and sweet! I'd love reading more like this โ˜บ๏ธ

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Hot damn!

Honestly, I couldn't give you anything less than 5* on everything ๐Ÿ™ˆ From the introduction right down to the last page, I was addicted to your book! The story was so intriguing, I couldn't put it down! I liked how they had actual problems, you might be a sappy, gooey writer - which I love -, but everything was so realistic and recognizable!

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Couldn't put it down!

So, honestly, at first, I added your story to my 'maybe' list, because I was intrigued by your synopsis, but I didn't quite know what to expect.
But then I started reading... and I was immediately hooked! I loved how their romance was there even though they didn't realise it. It's not the typical love story of mates who are smitten from the first look they share, but it's real and complicated. You managed to create depth to every personality as well as create realistic background stories for all of them. I think you have the makings for a great writer! Because everybody makes small typos, but not everybody can write a captivating, thrilling story that keeps you addicted until the very end.

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Awesome

Just a beautiful story! I was hooked from the very beginning and was seriously counting down days between the new chapters ๐Ÿ˜ I think you have a fluent writing style and the story and characters were original and entertaining. Great work!

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Amazing, intense, beautiful!

Another great story! And what a bunch of unexpected turns! I was seriously baffled again and again! There might have been a few minor typos, but I blame them on your enthusiasm and thanks to the flowing of the story, they're easily forgotten โ˜บ๏ธ

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Different and exciting!

This was definitely not what I expected! In a good way ;)
Your story is such a page-turner, I don't think I could put it away for even an hour!
The dialogues are funny, charming and none seem superfluous.
The characters are described perfectly and I really like all the dynamics and the rival gang part of it, which reminds me a bit of a modern day Romeo and Juliet.
I also personally love the touch of Trey's grandfather knowing all along what would happen ;)
Amazing story!

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Melting

I think the thing I remember best from this story, is the letter to Lucy from Zach. It was really sensitive and from the heart. I was a big fan of the secret account theme to begin the story with, as well as the complicated feelings Harper had, because I do believe that makes it realistic, since not all love stories are clear and sometimes feelings are messy. In conclusion: loved this book!

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Very tempting!

When I saw the brief introduction, I was immediately curious. I think the 3 kisses rule was really original as a story.
Sometimes I personally felt like it went a little fast, like how Emma would just go hang at Liam's house, while not really knowing him. But I guess that's how it might go if you have quite a small high school, you 'know' a little about everyone.
I really felt like his reactions were genuine and well motivated, so great job on that! I would definitely like to read more stories like this :)

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Theodore

I am absolutely in LOVE with your writing style! Each one of your stories is amazing, enchanting, unique, captivating, ... I could go on, but my list of words wouldn't be enough!
I loved how Theodore kept fighting for his Hannah, and I was also really charmed by her relationship with her brothers :)
You manage to write in such a way that everyone's personality shines through because of how you phrase things, and I know that's not an easy thing to do, so please keep on writing and creating some more magic :)

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Apple and the tree, y'know ;)

I've seriously been laughing so much with the kids' stories, I love how you've managed to bestow them with personalities that resemble their parents, but are also unique enough to give their story its own charm. Definitely rereading them all sometime!

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Again, wonderful!

O my gosh! Seriously, a worthy sequel to the first part. If I wasn't already addicted to their story, I would have been now! I don't know how you do it, but you make me feel their love! Stunning job!

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Incredible!

I really loved your book! It was one of my first reads on Inkitt, and honestly, I think I secretly compare everything to yours now. You have an amazing, fluent style, your characters are so lively, they could be standing right next to me! I also love that there's more to the story than just their love and attraction for each other, his history makes it very interesting. So I'm so glad for you that you've been able to turn it into an e-book, you deserve it!

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Addictive!

So, this was like the first story I've read where there's a dominating-submissive relationship, but because of this, I think I'm actually a fan now :)
I'm very fond of the characters, both Gen's spunkiness as Dom's caring personality. Amazing story!

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Thrilling story!

I'm a big fan of this kind of romantic story, with a certain history and a lot of exciting events, as well as very distinguished characters! The descriptions were perfect, I could imagine all the characters and scenes while reading and really felt everything along with them! I'd love to read more of your work!

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Naughty and nice ;)

I'm a big fan! I was intrigued by what the main character's motivation behind her 'rule' would be and I like that she'd not a typical girly girl, but has this badass side to her. I'm very fond of the double perspective. It's not an all gooey kind of romantic story, there's plenty of real emotions, like frustration, anguish, but also humor. The sexy scenes are steamy to say the least ๐Ÿ˜‰, but it always stays realistic to me. All in all, an amazing story definitely worth reading!

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Beautiful

I really loved the story! It's quite a basic love story, with the necessary ups and downs, but I do think it's uniqueness is in their magnetic kind of love and soulmateship ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Creepy and Captivating

Damn! I was like 'WTF is going on! But that made me want to continue reading, obviously :)!
It's a bit confusing in the beginning, I guess because there's not really a setting or any kind of information about the context, but that does drive up the intense speed. I assume it's a reflection of the character and in that opinion, I think you portrayed him nicely. My heart is actually beating like crazy from the suspense!

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Birches and Magnolias

Okay, so the introduction really grasped my attention! I was immediately curious as to what this 'secret' would be.
You have a very fluent writing style. You also manage to sketch the characters quite clearly from the beginning: the distant and brooding mr Woolf, the self indulgent King, the party lover and gossiper Axby, I can see them clearly while reading and that's one of the hardest things to achieve. Great job!

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Wolf's treasure

I like the story, however some facts aren't always correct, and I would personally like to have some more information on what Casey and the others look like.

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