Cosey Josey

Wow!

Such an intriguing story! I can't wait until all secrets are revealed 🤭 I'll be counting the days 🤩
Love the chemistry they have, and that you sometimes give us a peek into Blaze´s mind 😁
Sometimes it shows English is not your first language, but I always get what you mean, and that's what counts right 😁 And Noah better get his head on straight and ask Ava out damnit! 😂

Beautiful

Great, original mates story! Very thrilling way of writing, makes you want to read it all in one go! ☺️

Awesome

I immediately continued reading on Wattpad, not just because of my lack of patience, but because the story is amazing!
It's almost hard NOT to feel the hurt and sorrow the characters feel.
But I'm glad they have each other and I do love their interactions :)

Fantastic!

Such a wonderful, heartwarming love story, full of undeniable attraction and good old fashioned chivalry.
Your writing captivated me from the start, I was addicted from page one and constantly curious what would happen!
I loved how I could sense the difference when Theo was talking English with an accent, which was absolutely adorable!

Wonderful story!

Such a cute love story!
Great writing too, very fluent :)

Sensational

Thrilling adventurous story!
Not how I expected things to turn out at all when I read the summary!
Very nice writing style, pleasant to read ☺️

Another entertaining fantasy!

Sooo different from the first one, but equally mesmerizing!
You have a great writing style and a fantastic was of describing personalities to make them alive while reading.
Can't wait for Royal! :)

Addictive!

Absolutely fell in love with the story!
I like that you didn't drag things out unnecessarily and how every action had a logical reasoning behind it 😊 very well written! I think you almost can't improve, except for maybe some typos ;)
I was wondering what Lily looked like, as in her eye and hair color though 😁

Just... Wow

I'm still recovering from all the emotions I felt while reading this book! Their first meeting was so funny! I felt for both of them at certain points, but I'm so happy with how everything turned out! I personally can't imagine how a loss like she endured would feel, but you painted an amazing picture I could empathize with. Thank you for such a wonderful story!

I want more!

Awesome! I never saw the whole family trouble coming at first! Nice twist :) I wish there was maybe another chapter of Xavier's side, because his attraction to her was so cute and the efforts he made to conquer her heart..well, inspirational to all boyfriends I'd say!

Really awesome!

Your plot had me intrigued from the beginning! I thought "finally, something different" and I was not disappointed! :D
My heart must've been beating a million miles a minute at some points throughout the story! Can't say it covers it, but I really loved everything about it, the characters, the story, the hidden motives and secrets, even what both of them went through before they finally had their happy ending :)

Great sequel!

Just like in the first part, I loved the characters and interactions! Especially loved Noah's and Anais' teasing 😁 Still waiting for something to happen between Kash and Ben though 🙈
I'm excited for the next part! I think this was definitely a very exciting one!
Personally, I think the story went a little bit too fast sometimes. I think you have the space to extend certain parts a bit and add some more descriptions or content to keep everything flowing at a slightly slower pace.
Nevertheless, really enjoyed it! ☺️

Addictive!

I really enjoyed this first book! First of, because it wasn't just a werewolf story, but a supernatural story. Secondly, I liked that it's not all perfect, their histories, characters nor situation. After a couple of chapters, I honestly couldn't put it down. Also, I personally think you add the right amount of secrets and cliffhangers and stuff to keep readers on their toes ☺️
Like you said, it needs editing, for some typos and grammatical stuff, but I do think you're doing great so far!!! Now I'm going to start book 2 😁

Lovely!

First of, I couldn't agree more with your final note! 😂
About the story: I seriously felt for both the main characters! I often wanted to knock their heads together so their pieces would fall into place 😁 But I loved their story, their relationship, everything about them, especially the fact that they were different than other people ☺️

Beautiful!

First of all, you have a very unique and enchanting way of describing things as well as scenes. I personally am a big fan of that!
I never had the feeling like your story was going to fast, although more than a year flew by. I think you made the right choice in not lingering when it wasn't necessary, but taking just the right amount of time to illustrate how strong her feelings were. I also like that you used seasons and not months to describe this :)
Also, I really like your take on vampires, instead of going for the stereotypical approach, you were able to present us with a perspective I honestly can say I've never seen before, for example how he is capable of granting other people these special powers.
I loved it!

Beautiful

I really loved the story! It's quite a basic love story, with the necessary ups and downs, but I do think it's uniqueness is in their magnetic kind of love and soulmateship 😊

Black Hollow

I love how you describe things in a different way, such as orbs instead of eyes and the vines acting as thieves in the night! I think your style is unique and at the same time extremely suiting for this kind of story and setting.
I really appreciated how the first impression of the female character is quite sassy and confident, even for this time frame.
It's very intriguing, the first paragraphs tend to draw you in immediately, wondering what secrets you'll uncover when you continue. Definitely worth reading!

Amazing story!

I was intrigued when reading the summary and became addicted as soon as I started!
Aside from a few errors - which I will gladly assume are typos 😊 - I envy your writing!
Can't wait for the sequel!

Very intriguing!

Such an amazing story, again!
You create this feeling where you know more exciting things are going to happen without putting too much emphasis on them, great job!
Sometimes the story and dialogues move a little too fast and somewhat too easy for me, but that´s a personal preference.
Keep up the good work! ^^

Mindblowing!

Honestly, I don't know where to start! 😱
First of, amazing, strongly individual characters! All with their very own qualities, it's almost like I was talking to them myself.
You kept a perfect balance between descriptions and actions throughout the story, it was always more than enough to paint the scene, but never too much to get lost in it 😊
And obviously, the plot! I couldn't even put my phone down to sleep!! Every page was a new adventure, a new mystery to unravel!
I'm thinking about setting an alarm Christmas Day just to make sure to add the sequel to my list!
To finish - because I could keep going on and on - I feel VERY strongly that this would be a BADASS bestseller! 🥰

Addictive!

Just, wow 🤩
I think I'll need some time to process this story, because I'm going to miss them all like crazy!!!
Great plot, awesome characters, flawless writing and describing of emotions, an amazing pageturner about life and love ☺

Very original!

First of, kudos for not writing another typical romance story! 😁
I thoroughly enjoyed every unique aspect: her broody personality, how she grows emotionally, that she doesn't need a man to feel complete, and her distancing herself from her toxic family.
It was a real page turner and I can't wait to check out some more of your stories 😊

Amazing

Great story! Love the storyline, how it's about love but there are other themes present as well.
I thought the characters were deliberately non stereotypical, the bad boy with a good home and the shy girl with sass! They were very relatable that way.
Descriptions throughout were good, but I would've loved to read some lyrics from all the songs that are mentioned or performed.
Can't wait to find out what happens next!!!

Exceptional!

Love, love, love this!
The story is amazing and the dialogues keep me on the edge of my seat, literally! It feels like I'm actually there, watching them. The nerves I feel in my belly when I'm reading are proof of the fact that it's very relatable. I feel so strongly for the characters, I really hope those who deserve it get their happy ending and the others, well... 😜

Really thrilling!

So far, you've really managed to make me curious!
There is a LOT of potential in the story.
However, I have some general thoughts.
As others in the comments have mentioned, both grammar and punctuation need correcting.
It would also help to describe the characters some more, as in a more elaborate description of their appearance as well as their thoughts and how the others see them.
However, I already love the plot! The underlying story is pretty badass and exciting!
If it were me, I would slow the pace a bit, because I find it hard to imagine after what she's been through, she'd feel so comfortable so quickly. Maybe explicitly mention the different days so we get a better feeling of the time passing.
Anyways, I'm excited to see what'll happen next.
Oh almost forgot, I think the names are so awesome and original! 😊

Wonderful

I'm so glad we got to see how their story continued!
Great writing, alazing chemistry and some lovely ideas, especially how you described their home, it seems like a dream forever home 😊

Wonderful!

Amazing, enchanting, beautiful, and so much more!
It´s so refreshing to read about a ´bad boy´ who shows his softer side 😊
Smooth, fluent writing and nice descriptions!

Captivating romance!

Sich an amazing story!
I think it was really clever starting with the prologue , since my curiosity was instantly going through the roof!
Your writing is great and I specifically think you did a wonderful job with creating such realostic personalities.
It would be nice to read about Hunter and Ash, or maybe even about a grown up Logan, cause I think he´ll be quite the handsome gentleman growing up 😜

Awwww!

This has to be one of the sweetest stories, when it comes to the two of them and their chemistry 😊
I really appreciate the fact that every story is different, with different issues for the characters based on their personal backgrounds.
Smooth and nice writing! On to the next one I hope 😁

Cuteness overload!

They are just so cute and romantic!
Very exciting twists in the story! Love the fact that we get to know some more types of shifters.
Great writing, again 😉

Fabulous!

Wonderful story! So many things to love about it, really!
The characters are all great and unique; I love how there´s different types of shifters and they´re like common knowledge; the story isn´t just about their love, but about their lives too, which is very thrilling!
Nice and smooth writing and damn, those steamy scenes! Can´t wait to read another one of yours!

Beautiful!

I was so happy to find this book after reading MBFBF, because I thought every one of them deserved their happy ending!
You make dialogues and situations so realistic, it´s as if I´m watching someone´s life roll out while reading. And the feelings you´re able to project through your characters, just wow!

Badass!

Amazing, original story!
Great writing and wonderful characters!
Not giving any spoilers cause you really ought to read it yourself 😁

Cuteness overload!

Really lovely short story! 😊
Such a cool idea, the Games 😂 Also, I liked how you kept the outcome a bit vague, like everything was still possible, not like you knew from the start how it would end.
Very smooth writing and great character descriptions! I honestly think I have some date ideas now 😆

Amazone!

What an amazing journey!
Honestly at first I had no idea what to expect, but this trilogy blew away all my expectations!
I love how you use different points of view and different description styles. Colton charmed his way into my heart with his rugged honesty 😊

Mind-blowing

Great original story! It's very refreshing to read about a werewolf without the whole stereotypical pack business or mates! I would have loved a bit of a description of Alice's appearance though.

Hooked from the start!

What an amazing story! 😍
Honestly, I think this'll be on my mind for quite some time! I love your writing style, it's very entertaining, and your dialogues are just hilarious 🤣 But also realistic and heartfelt ☺️

If I could give you one tip, it would be to mention at the start that it's better to read Something about Summer first, to be able to follow everything, or you could include a short synopsis of the first story as introduction, just so most questions are answered ☺️

Nice story

Really cool storyline!
But for me personally it went a bit too fast. The story and characters are definitely intriguing enough to take your time to elaborate a bit more with them.
Otherwise, I loved how she got back on her feet after everything! Curious to see who'll be next ☺️

Wonderful story

Loved it!
Beautiful romance, with many original twists 🙂
Gave a very realistic view on how to cope with loss.
Just a few typos here and there 😉 but furthermore great writing!

Brilliant!

Honestly, what an amazing story! I can't wait for part two!

I love how you didn't fall into all of the werewolf and mates clichés ☺️ It was a great combo of romance, fantasy, action, just everything was spot on and made me speed through the story way too quickly out of curiosity and empathy for what was to come!

Incredible!

You're such a great writer and you've honestly created something amazing!!
The story is exciting, sweet, adventurous, original, and so on! 😍 I love all the characters, even despite some rocky starts 😉
I really like how you've thought of this whole apocalyptic world and have thought of logical explanations for everything that's so unique in your story.
Can't wat for the sequel! ☺️

Beautiful!

Sooooo romantic! But not in any cliche kind of way 😁
You're an amazing writer, who made me feel everything along with the characters! I think this definitely belongs in my list of favorite romance stories :)

Damn good!

Just amazing! I think I accidentally speed-read your story, just because it was that good 😅 I loved all the characters and can't wait for the sequel! I honestly can't tell this is your first story, 'cause your writing is fantastic both in style and grammar.

If there's one thing I'd suggest looking at, it would be the part right after they meet her dad, since they start training really quickly together, after all those years of not seeing each other.

Really nice!

Short but awesome!
Such a great romantic werewolf story! ☺️

Amazing!

So first of, I gotta say, the chapter that had me sincerely smiling the most is your final truth :) I honestly feel so happy for you to have accepted who you are and now I know what you've been through, the story finally clicks :)
About the story itself now! 😉 Great writing! Really original plot too and I have loved every single interaction between Eclipse and Sam ☺️

Lovely read

Really nice story!
Like the way he didn't instantly claim her like in most mates stories, but eases her into it slowly ☺️ interesting background story as well!

Awesome story!

I loved so many things!
Generally, your writing, which is very captivating.
Then how it's not about teens, but mates who are somewhat older. How they struggle a bit but also can't deny their attraction. The plottwists as well 😁

Goosebumps!

Wonderful story! You just captured us from the start, just like their magnetic connection I imagine ☺️
You really have a great way of writing, both in conversations where the characters become clear, as in the descriptions! Fantastic job! Enjoyed it so much I'm a little sad now that it's over 😅

Great story!

Really liked your style, you always had a logic, so no holes in the plot, on the contrary, it was really good ☺️ perfect pace of events and awesome characters!

Lovely!

Great story! Awesome characters and some really original ideas 😁 I'd love a sequel or more chapters 😜

Undescribable!

WOW!
I feel like I've been taking hostage by a book, and now I don't want this feeling of being set free 🙈
Please please PLEASE share this with the whole world, because if there were ever a story so captivating it ought to be read by everyone, it's this!
Okay I'm fangirling pretty badly, but SERIOUSLY! I've read over a 100 stories but never have I been so glued to my phone as for this one!
The characters are great, even when you feel like banging their heads together sometimes 😂 I loved how you get to tag along on everyone's journey to their happily ever after ☺️

So cute

Really sweet story! Great characters!
You did an amazing job creating the feeling Nicki has, of keeping distance from everyone to not get too emotionally involved, which is something quite difficult! At least I could feel it while reading, and because of that I could empathize better ☺️

Very original!

Amazing story! I'm so glad to read about a combination of different magical species for once :)
Her powers are really cool! And you did a great job describing how they work.
Maybe towards the end, everything went a little bit too quick for me personally, I would have loved to read about Ellie's visit to the other Alpha, or where Michael's been all this time, but nevertheless I really liked it! :)

Lovely

I always enjoy your stories! Amongst other things because of your writing style, it's so fluent and real, which makes the emotions all the more relatable ☺️
Even though you can kind of guess how their agreement will turn out, it's still the little things that make the story unique, like the dinner at the Spanish restaurant, the details about the hoodie, it's attention to those that makes it great! ☺️

No words! ☺️

Amazing!
I cannot think of a single thing that's even slightly bad 😅
Great descriptions, awesome characters, heartwarming and breaking scenes, flawless writing, and so on!

Amazing!

What a rollercoaster!!!
You captured me and dragged me through all the ups and downs, which is a major compliment to your writing skills!
Because of your detailed descriptions, I was able to comprehend how complicated life can be when going through trauma. I personally liked the more elaborate descriptions and thoughts, because they are realistic and human and not perfect or incomplete.
I'm so glad about the happy ending ☺️
If there's anything to improve, I'd say some minor spelling errors, and in one of the last chapter, we never got to know where they were going that was West? 😏

Promising ☺️

I honestly think you have a nack for creating a wonderful story! But - big but 😉 - you do need to work on your technical writing skills. Some phrases weren't right, some due to normal typos, others because of grammar.
I also think you have an interesting enough story to slow down certain bits and elaborate on the side stories, unless ofcourse you plan to give them all a separate one, in which case I am already curious to find out what happened to everyone else ☺️

Nice story

I think the storyline is really original, which I liked.
But overall it seems a bit rushed to me, the story is more than interesting enough for you to take some time and just make everything a little more elaborated.
Also, sometimes the information changed. If I remember correctly, Joe was 14 at first, afterwards, he turned out to be 17. And the age at which her dad left varies too, between 7 and 9.
It's not really bothering, but when you read the story in one go - which I did because I was very taken by it all ;) - you kind of notice those things.
Keep on writing I'd say!

The Lost Princess

I could not put this story down!
From the start, I was absolutely hooked!
It's sooooo well written :D
And it's not a regular werewolf story, or just about finding mates, but there's much more to it than that!
The pace is perfect, as well as all the descriptions, it's just incredibly pleasant and just nice to read.
My heartbeat did increase during several parts and I held my breath more than once, wanting to find out what would happen next.
AMAZING STORY!!! <3

Grandioso

Looked up the Italian for you :D
I think the story is great, indeed it's not that I liked Antonio in the beginning, but throughout the story, you could see him grow, and her too!
Very intriguing and thrilling, definitely a wonderful original love story!

Awesome again!

Love the storyline!
Lot of suspense, never a dull moment, love the big family too! ☺️

Wow!

My throat is dry from the suspense!
I'm so shocked and awed at the same time, I'm immediately going for the next part!
Poor Bradley... Poor Samantha...
Written very well, good amount of details, maybe some more about their appearances would be nice, but that's just what I like 😁

Great romantic adventure!

What a pleasure to read!
Your writing is spot on, the characters are so distinctive and clear and just feel like they're alive ☺️
I love that it's not just the cliché romance, all sticky and clingy, bit that there's trouble, ups and downs, and ofcourse a very strong heartspeeding attraction 😄
I do wonder if the other siblings will get their own stories? 😉

Lovely

Everybody needs a knight in shining armor like Milton 😁
I felt so sorry for Aubri, but I loved how through the story, everything turned out fine!
Great writing as always :)

Terrific!

Such an intriguing story! I'm so glad it had a happy ending!
You have a very enjoyable writing style.

Mr. Ceo

The story is nice, but it needs some finetuning 🙂
I really enjoyed the characters, they were quite refreshing actually!

Awwww!

Incredibly unexpected but fantastic romance!
Such recognizable emotions, it was quite the rollercoaster!
Your writing is brilliant ☺️

So cute!

Wonderful, heart-melting love story!
I also got a little jealous of the band family 😁

Nice story!

Overall, I really liked the story.
I don't know a lot about the MC world, but it was very nice to read several interesting aspects :)
Though I love that she's a badass, some parts seem to go a bit fast and that sometimes makes it a bit unrealistic for me personally.

Awesome and refreshing!

I was immediately intrigued when I read the intro! It's so nice to read about women who have talents that aren't considered normal for them, but at which they excell! :D
I loved the romance blooming between them, how she managed to get through to him.
Also, the charachters were just amazing! She first seems to be just a shy smart girl, but she has more sass than expected, and he's just a goofy sweetheart and a true gentleman!
Those romantic scenes and first times were written incredibly!
Consider me a fan :D

Amazing!

What a captivating love story! 😍
Seriously hit me right in the feels so many times! Personally, one of the more realistic mate stories, because it's not all sunshine and rainbows, it's indeed a happy ending ☺️

Modern fairytale ^^

Awesome story! It had all the necessary ups and downs to keep things interesting! Always like to get two points of view ;)
I also liked the story behind his tattoos and their similarities in growing up they didn't realize :)
Written in a very pleasant style :)

Cool!

Really cool story! Very refreshing as well :)
I had so much fun while reading how they wanted to score points and imagining their faces :D

Liked it

So I'm now halfway.
I think I preferred the first story better, because where I'm at now, I'm starting to lose interest.
Maybe it's because the second part is longer, I'm not really sure. I still love the characters, so that's not it :)
But it takes quite a long time - which considering what she has to do, is required ofcourse. But yeah, it kind of ruins the flow I felt while reading the first one.
You're writing is still lovely!

Undescribable!

OMYGOD!
It's so hard to find the words to describe this amazing story!
I cried so hard...
It was beautiful, well-written and honestly, breathtaking!

Original and lovely!

Great story!
I loved how it started, as well as the therapy sessions in between, it was nice to have a different view on things that way ☺️
I also loved all the characters and the drama 😅 I thought it was a very realistic story with life's ups and downs ^^

Absolutely amazing!

Very original story! Writing is flawless and very smooth! Loved the combination of fantasy and erotic romance!

Cute

You have a way with words that manage to capture a reader's attention :) Something to be proud of!
I liked the story, although I do think that in the end everything suddenly went pretty fast. On the other hand, I get that she'd get back with him, but it just seems a little head over heels.
Very nice descriptions with just the right amount of details!

Awesome!

I really liked your story!
I think in general your writing is pretty good, as in tenses, sentences and everything, but maybe sometimes you went too quickly, because of which there is a growing amount of typos.
I think if you polished it a bit, it would be perfect!
Content wise, I was so glad to read about a Luna who wasn't afraid to step up and their relationship was awfully sweet! :) I'm looking forward to part 2!

Interesting!

Again, very well-written! I like that your stories always have a different plot and energy in the relationships 😊

Really good!

To start, your writing is amazing! Even though the story is quite short, you still manage to describe everything realistically enough to get sucked into it. Loved how he had certain morals and did not treat her badly :)

Wonderful!

Awesome story! Really original starting point, which made the whole thing more realistic in my eyes. My heart did break though 😢 Already added the sequel to my 'to read' list and secretly hoping that Milan is Milo's 🤞

Girlpower!

Loved the story! Awesome powers as well as the way they appear on her skin and fur 😁 Personally, sometimes it went a little bit fast for me, but a very nice, sweet story nonetheless ☺️

Awesome!

Very nice and romantic story! Just the right amount of action too ☺️

Very cute!

Great story! I like the fact that she's stubborn and a total badass when fighting! I personally would've liked more elaborate descriptions at some points, but I totally get your decision of not wanting the possibility of slowing the flow 😊

Damn! Sequel please!!!

First of, you are an amazing writer! I'm so often annoyed when I'm reading and either the grammar is off, or there are plenty of other errors, however, I never saw any of those! You have a perfect grasp on tenses, the flowing of your sentences to keep the story going, just wonderful ☺️
Secondly, I'm in love with every aspect of your story! I personally think it's one of the most original and better stories here 😉 The idea of double shifters is so awesome!
Finally, I really hope you'll be writing a sequel! There are so many things left to discover, like who will be Kaden's Queen, what happened to Cassie's sister and also, what about Slayde's brother? 'Cause I don't believe his disappearance is the end of his story 😏

Lovely <3

Amazing, wonderful, exciting, addicting, and so on 😁
I just loved their attraction to each other and my heart melted every time that little girl opened op to Flick! Some very enticing descriptions as well 😉 I thought it was also really nice to read about her background and the fact that he wanted her to see what was possible in her future ☺️

Damn!

I was immediately intrigued and you did not disappoint!
I've laughed, I've cried, all thanks to you taking me on a rollercoaster!

Loved it!

I think you're a really good writer and have a flowing style. I liked that you didn't choose the expected turn of events, but baffled us at certain points :) Would love to read more, 'cause I've grown quite fond of the characters!

o my gosh!

Seriously addictive story! So many things I did not see coming at all! It's sexy but funny at the same time :) Can't wait to start part 2!

Cool story!

I really enjoyed reading your book!
Not just the characters were amazing, but her blessing from the Moon Goddess was amazingly awesome. I liked that he started off with these unrealistic expectations, only to realize what an amazing mate he had :)
Very nice writing, kept me curious all the way ;)

So beautiful

Just finished reading your story and I think it's definitely one to add to my favorite werewolf novels!
I think it's such an original storyline! Her being treated as an outcast and turning out to be the Alpha's mate! I also liked the fact it wasn't stereotypical in the way that they weren't virgins anymore and were already older than the average wolf finding their mate. It made their situation just so realistic!
Liked the touch of naming the celebrities that looked like the characters, it actually made it fun to picture them like that :D

Amazing!

I don't know where to begin! I loved so many different aspects of your story: how their relationship started out as something else; the friendships they made along the way; the complexity of the trauma she endured as well as the consequences; how strongly they feel for each other; ... and so on!
I've personally never encountered anyone who went through something like this, but while reading this, I had the feeling that I actually did.
Your writing was flawless and fluent, never too tedious, but always perfect to keep the suspense going.

Sequel please!!!

Can't wait to see what happens next!
Loved how there were a lot of unexpected turns on the story.
Your writing is really good and you sketched the characters perfectly in order to picture them 😊

Unexpected!

At first I didn't read your story, because I was thinking it would be a collection of short stories due to the small number of chapters. But when I started reading, I couldn't stop! I may be a little biased since I met my husband online 😉 but still, your writing was flawless, the story was sexy and entertaining, not too long or anything, but still enough background to make it a wonderful love story!

Beautiful!

Proved a story doesn't have to be extremely long to be beautiful 😍 I was actually surprised how everything turned out, because you didn't give away too much information at the beginning, which I like 😁 your writing is impeccable!

Loved it!

Another great story! I liked that there was such an intriguing background behind her story, it ended their romance on such a thrilling note 🙊 How you describe their attraction is just amazing and the hot scenes were exactly that-HOT!

Awesome!

This has to be one of my favorite werewolf stories!!!
The story is thrilling, with a bunch of unexpected although realistic events.
The characters and relationships between them are so lifelike, I felt like I really got to know them while reading. You're an amazing writer!

Definitely potential!

I think it's such a wonderful idea to spend some stories on the topics for women you mention. I definitely like reading about those, because they are always an eye opener to me.
However, I do think you could use some grammar reflection and some extra time to optimize your punctuation, for example, there are often comma's missing and your 'i's should be in capitals when speaking in the first person.
I did like the other language aspect, because it gives the story an authentic feel.
Please keep on writing, because I'd love to read your opinions on other matters as well!

Amazing!

I was intrigued by the summary and you did not disappoint! I loved that it's about a beautiful girl, no matter what size she is, and I definitely believe there should be more guys like Axel, teaching girls that their worth is not in their weight but in their strength and personality ☺️ So glad to have read this story!!!

Beautiful :)

Loved this story! It was so funny, witty and sweet! I'd love reading more like this ☺️

Hot damn!

Honestly, I couldn't give you anything less than 5* on everything 🙈 From the introduction right down to the last page, I was addicted to your book! The story was so intriguing, I couldn't put it down! I liked how they had actual problems, you might be a sappy, gooey writer - which I love -, but everything was so realistic and recognizable!

Awesome

Just a beautiful story! I was hooked from the very beginning and was seriously counting down days between the new chapters 😁 I think you have a fluent writing style and the story and characters were original and entertaining. Great work!

Amazing, intense, beautiful!

Another great story! And what a bunch of unexpected turns! I was seriously baffled again and again! There might have been a few minor typos, but I blame them on your enthusiasm and thanks to the flowing of the story, they're easily forgotten ☺️

Different and exciting!

This was definitely not what I expected! In a good way ;)
Your story is such a page-turner, I don't think I could put it away for even an hour!
The dialogues are funny, charming and none seem superfluous.
The characters are described perfectly and I really like all the dynamics and the rival gang part of it, which reminds me a bit of a modern day Romeo and Juliet.
I also personally love the touch of Trey's grandfather knowing all along what would happen ;)
Amazing story!

Melting

I think the thing I remember best from this story, is the letter to Lucy from Zach. It was really sensitive and from the heart. I was a big fan of the secret account theme to begin the story with, as well as the complicated feelings Harper had, because I do believe that makes it realistic, since not all love stories are clear and sometimes feelings are messy. In conclusion: loved this book!

Very tempting!

When I saw the brief introduction, I was immediately curious. I think the 3 kisses rule was really original as a story.
Sometimes I personally felt like it went a little fast, like how Emma would just go hang at Liam's house, while not really knowing him. But I guess that's how it might go if you have quite a small high school, you 'know' a little about everyone.
I really felt like his reactions were genuine and well motivated, so great job on that! I would definitely like to read more stories like this :)

Theodore

I am absolutely in LOVE with your writing style! Each one of your stories is amazing, enchanting, unique, captivating, ... I could go on, but my list of words wouldn't be enough!
I loved how Theodore kept fighting for his Hannah, and I was also really charmed by her relationship with her brothers :)
You manage to write in such a way that everyone's personality shines through because of how you phrase things, and I know that's not an easy thing to do, so please keep on writing and creating some more magic :)

Apple and the tree, y'know ;)

I've seriously been laughing so much with the kids' stories, I love how you've managed to bestow them with personalities that resemble their parents, but are also unique enough to give their story its own charm. Definitely rereading them all sometime!

Incredible!

I really loved your book! It was one of my first reads on Inkitt, and honestly, I think I secretly compare everything to yours now. You have an amazing, fluent style, your characters are so lively, they could be standing right next to me! I also love that there's more to the story than just their love and attraction for each other, his history makes it very interesting. So I'm so glad for you that you've been able to turn it into an e-book, you deserve it!

Addictive!

So, this was like the first story I've read where there's a dominating-submissive relationship, but because of this, I think I'm actually a fan now :)
I'm very fond of the characters, both Gen's spunkiness as Dom's caring personality. Amazing story!

Thrilling story!

I'm a big fan of this kind of romantic story, with a certain history and a lot of exciting events, as well as very distinguished characters! The descriptions were perfect, I could imagine all the characters and scenes while reading and really felt everything along with them! I'd love to read more of your work!

Naughty and nice ;)

I'm a big fan! I was intrigued by what the main character's motivation behind her 'rule' would be and I like that she'd not a typical girly girl, but has this badass side to her. I'm very fond of the double perspective. It's not an all gooey kind of romantic story, there's plenty of real emotions, like frustration, anguish, but also humor. The sexy scenes are steamy to say the least 😉, but it always stays realistic to me. All in all, an amazing story definitely worth reading!

Creepy and Captivating

Damn! I was like 'WTF is going on! But that made me want to continue reading, obviously :)!
It's a bit confusing in the beginning, I guess because there's not really a setting or any kind of information about the context, but that does drive up the intense speed. I assume it's a reflection of the character and in that opinion, I think you portrayed him nicely. My heart is actually beating like crazy from the suspense!

Birches and Magnolias

Okay, so the introduction really grasped my attention! I was immediately curious as to what this 'secret' would be.
You have a very fluent writing style. You also manage to sketch the characters quite clearly from the beginning: the distant and brooding mr Woolf, the self indulgent King, the party lover and gossiper Axby, I can see them clearly while reading and that's one of the hardest things to achieve. Great job!

Wolf's treasure

I like the story, however some facts aren't always correct, and I would personally like to have some more information on what Casey and the others look like.