Craig Beckham

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Incredible!

This is an intense, and an utterly engrossing fast-paced stroll through human history and culture.

This wonderful story allows the reader to engage more with this particular time period, through the eyes of some truly interesting characters.

Your chapter structure could not have been chosen better for writing this kind of story. I believe that the story's first person narrative, from multiple perspectives, was a sound idea, and it kept me wanting more.

This story was an emotional rollercoaster, where plot twists and ever developing characters were in abundance.

Chapter Four has me yearning to discover what has become of these loveable characters, especially Ester, and Klara. With the use of such an effective plot twist at the very end of this chapter, I am eager to read on.

There were a few punctuation flaws and missing words, as previously mentioned. yet that can be expected within any piece of writing.
Do let me know when you have wrote some more, I look forward to reading it. Great work!

Craig. B.

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A unique and vivid portrayal of another world!

I thoroughly enjoyed the descriptive technique that the writer applies here. This is truly another world that I would like to see more of. The dialogue also kept me enthralled, I just wish that there was more to read, certainly something to look forward to. There may have been couple of punctuation mistakes, but the plot of the story overshadowed these, very enjoyable.

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