Craig Beckham

Newcastle Upon Tyne

I love to write, and to challenge myself. "The only way of discovering the limits of the possible, is to venture a little way past them into the impossible" Arthur C. Clarke

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Unique!

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Excellent writing style and structure.

Intriguing characters, living in a world full of possibilities.

I love an exciting fantasy story, and that is what you have given me. I look forward to seeing it completed. Keep up the good work!

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Magical

This story made for a real page-turner, where interesting, and well-rounded characters from the past and present, are written into a unique plot. Cleva's character will always stay with me.

I have always found the recorded history and mythology of witchcraft to be a fascinating subject, and this story explores the realm of magic extensively. The descriptive technique was great, with vivid scene setting at the start of each paragraph.

I will very likely come back to this again, and I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Incredible!

As you'll notice within the comments, I truly loved this story, perhaps even more so than book one. The plot was outstanding, with characters and battles that left me staring in awe. You have a unique writing style, and a way of detailing every little aspect as you go. I'll be coming back to this one again and again, nicely done. Onto book three next!

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A universe to get lost in!

Firstly I'd like to say that the writing style made for a lovely read. As a huge Sci-Fi fan, I thought that the plot was fantastic, filled with well-rounded characters and exciting technology. I did not spot many mistakes, and I loved it so much that I am going to keep coming back to it.

When you want to take a break from the hardships of real life, this is a universe that I'd like to get sucked into, plus I love spaceships! I look forward to reading more of your work.

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A brilliant read!

This story was fantastic, with well-rounded characters, vivid detail and a plot that was utterly engrossing. The main character alone makes for an addictive read, and I can't wait for the next chapters to see where her journey will lead to next. Keep up the good work!

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Promising

This story has a lot of potential, and the plot is one that I could read over and over again. I look forward to re-reading the finished article. Keep up the good work.

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A pleasure to read

This story has a fantastic plot, with well-rounded characters that I have come to love. As you mentioned, there were a few heart breaking moments which kept me immersed throughout.
The author did a great job of setting the scene throughout each chapter, and this was enriched with a wonderful writing style.

I look forward to reading more of your work.

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An epic adventure

The characters in this story were well thought out, and they helped to create a plot that I found to be wonderful and highly imaginative.

There was a great attention to detail, and the author's writing technique left me wanting more. I look forward to book two.

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Can't put it down!

Have you ever wanted to read an addictive story that is fast-paced, full of action, with scientific discoveries in abundance? Look no further, here we have a tale of desperation, where the survival of humanity hinges upon their ability to pull off a truly miraculous feat.

The author has an incredible imagination, with a profound ability to bring together so many unique, and interesting characters. The writing style is wonderful, and the plot makes for a real page-turner.

There is nothing that I can suggest for improvement here, I love the book so much that I am going to keep it in my reading list to come back to. Keep up the good work.

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A beautiful tale

The author has an amazing writing style, and it allowed for a real page turning experience. A wonderful love story between two adorable characters.

I like Marcus the best, keep up the good work, and I look forward to reading more.

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Promise is full of promise!

The plot is an interesting one, with a lot of potential. The characters are well rounded, and loveable. The emotional dialogue suits those characters as well. Any grammatical errors can be fixed, and I am excited to read more. Keep it up.

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A story with potential

The plot idea was very interesting, and Jeremy's character allows plenty of room for development as the story progresses.
It has a lot of potential, and I look forward to reading more when it is finished. Keep up the hard work.

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An awesome read!

This was an amazing story, told from the perspective of the zombies! Honestly, I have not read anything like it. After all, zombie stories tend to follow the lead of human characters instead. As a result, I could not help but compare their lives to ours.

It is very well written, and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

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A real page turner!

I don't usually take to this genre, but I was intrigued. The characters are well built on, and that is what does it for me. Keep up the good work!

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An intriguing read

There's nothing better than a good, long story to delve into. While some words were out of place, their meaning was still clear to me. I thoroughly enjoyed the plot which had interesting characters, along with some vivid attention to detail. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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An intriguing read

Each chapter was short, but powerful, where characters were well built upon with few words. I really liked this. The plot was an interesting one as well, nicely done. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Incredible!

I have read all three books quite quickly, simply because I could not put them down! I'd go as far to say that this book, and the two before it are the best that I've read in a long time.

The writing style was unique, the characters were awesome and well built upon throughout each chapter. The attention to detail was once again spectacular, and it only made me fall in love with the plot that much more.

I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story, and any other piece of writing that you create. You have a fan in me!

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Promising

This story was quite the tear-jerker. The mystery and emotion on display only made me like the characters even more, and I especially liked Paisley. The plot is an interesting one, and the attention to detail only enhanced my experience as a reader.
I look forward to the next chapters. Keep up the good work.

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A great read!

The writing style made for a pleasant read, and the plot of the story flowed nicely. Filled with interesting and well-rounded characters, I could not put this one down.

The attention to detail was perfect, where the reading of each chapter made for a vivid experience. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Incredible writing!

With a beautiful writing style, and characters which are well rounded, this story made for a compelling read. I highly recommend it, and I'm very much looking forward to scouring through more of your work.

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A brilliant read!

This story was a real page turner, full of mystery and hair-raising moments. The characters were great, and the plot was intriguing. I also loved the references to archaeology, it only peaked my interest even further. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Thrilling

I've thoroughly enjoyed this story, anything involving ghosts and spooky plot twists always manage to grab my attention. There's lovely attention to detail, and characters that are interesting. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Page Turning!

The story was very well written, and it was one of those which you can easily relate to, with characters and conflicts within the plot that we can all understand. It was a pleasure to read.

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An intriguing read

It was mainly the attention to detail that drew me in with this story, I soon realised that it also had a lovely plot and some very interesting characters!

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Promising

I believe that this story has a lot of potential, and I love the way in which the characters are building up. There is also a nice attention to detail here, keep up the good work, and I look forward to reading more.

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Magical

I have not had the pleasure to read much poetry, but this was a beautiful experience. I followed every single word of the adventure with awe, and fell in love with the characters right from the start.

I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Eye-catching

I am loving the characters in this so far. When you can tell that they have a lot of secrets, or backstories that could fill a book in themselves, that is when you can't help but read on.
The plot is very intriguing as well, honestly I have not yet ready a story with this kind of theme before, and I am loving it. I look forward to the rest.

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An amazing tale

The characters were well built upon, and I particularly liked Yuri. What a lovely way to end that chapter as well, it was packed full of mystery.
I look forward to reading more.

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A page turner

It was the powerful Anders pack which drew me into this story. The characters are well rounded, and the plot is fantastic. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Wonderful

This story was very well written, the characters were loveable and the plot made for an emotional rollercoaster. I look forward to reading more of your work, and honestly, I will probably come back to this again. I will be keeping it in my reading list.

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Thought Provoking

This story was incredible, the plot was amazing and it truly got me thinking. It just shows how small our lovely little planet is in comparison to the rest of the universe.
The characters were well rounded, and helped to make it a real page turner.

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Promising

I will end up adding to this review as the story progresses, but from what I have read so far, I love it. The plot idea is great, with two powerful main characters that I am dying to learn more about. I look forward to the finished article.

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Beautiful

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Some pieces of writing work better as a short story, and others as a novel. This would work as either. With relatable and well rounded characters, the plot of the story is allowed to flourish in short order.
I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Stays with you

I thoroughly enjoyed this novel. I fell in love with the plot, and the characters were well rounded. I especially loved Headmaster Charon!
The author's attention to detail made for an engrossing read, and I look forward to the next book, keep up the good work.

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An excellent start

I was engrossed all throughout this first chapter. The emotion and vivid detail being described was intense, and I look forward to reading more. Well done.

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An intriguing read!

I do not always take to this genre, but I was pleasantly surprised. The writing style was lovely, and the attention to detail helped to paint a vivid picture throughout each chapter. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Has it all!

This story was incredible, with a plot that I will not be forgetting any time soon. The characters were great, and the attention to detail with every single aspect within each chapter was impeccable. I am truly looking forward to reading more.

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A pleasure to read

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Its not usually the genre that I go for, yet the attention to detail and exciting characters kept me going. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Amazing!

I was hooked after reading the prologue. The plot was fantastic, the characters were interesting and the attention to detail kept me wanting more.

Keep it up.

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Promising

I do enjoy a good tragic tale, and this story has all of the makings of one. The characters are interesting as well, which makes me want to read more.

I look forward to the following chapters.

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A lovely little story

The author managed to build each of the characters up with few words, and I fell in love with them right away. Aiden was my favourite, with a lot of mystery behind him.

I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Eerily addictive!

The author demonstrated a use of page-turning creativity. The writing style works perfectly with this particular genre as well. The spooky details of this haunting are told in a way which left me wanting more, this was especially the case with the chosen cliff-hangers at the end of each chapter. The characters are mysterious and well rounded, which is exactly what you want in a story.

I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Werewolves!

This story has excellent attention to detail. The characters are well rounded, Jax is my favourite of course. The author has a lovely writing style, of which made for a compelling read

I look forward to reading more of your work, keep it up.

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Romantic

The story was beautifully written, and the plot flowed nicely. The characters were well rounded and addictive, especially my favourite of whom was Jake. I do not usually read this genre, and may have blushed a little, only a little. It defined the term 'page-turner'.
I truly enjoyed it, and I look forward to reading more of your work.

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A great tale

The use of famous quotes to begin each chapter was a very nice touch, and one that we don't see very often. The plot is perfect, the world is magical and the characters were well built on. It was a lovely escape from reality.

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Creative

The author has a beautiful writing style, and it is great that such an interesting plot is not lost amidst each character's point of view. Quentin's character has it all, and it made me want to read more. I look forward to reading the next chapters. Keep up the good work.

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Spine-tingling

There is no better read than what you get from a story that is filled with mystery and suspicious characters that you can't stop thinking about. This plot stuck with me. It is very well written, just like the author's other works.

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A heartfelt story.

The way in which the author addressed complex relationships in this story was incredible. I truly felt invested in the happiness of the characters. It is beautifully written.

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Haunting!

The story defines the term 'page turner'. The characters are well rounded, with a lot of potential. Even though there are only four chapters so far, the plot stays with you after you put it down. It is haunting! Keep up the good work, and I can't wait to read the rest of it.

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A pleasant read

I must say, I am no ballet dancer. As someone with little knowledge of the art, I found Rachel's story to be fascinating. I actually feel educated. The pain that ballet dancers must go through, both physically and emotionally!

The story is well written. Each of the main characters were nicely rounded, and as a result of that the plot naturally flourished. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Enthralling!

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It is well written, with an interesting plot. I was hooked from the beginning.

The characters are entertaining, loveable and most of all bubbly (Especially Cindy and Emma). I loved the cliff-hanger too.

I look forward to reading it all again when it's complete.

Good work.

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A story with potential

I like the overall plot of the story. There are a few aspects of grammar, punctuation and sentence structure that could use a little work. This is normal for any ongoing piece of writing though.

The characters are mysterious, and will allow for further exploration throughout the later chapters.

I look forward to reading it when it's finished. keep it up!

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You have a convert in me

I have always took to reading science fiction more than anything. This story jumped out at me, and now I can't get enough. Great plot. Great structure and great characters. I look forward to reading more of your work!

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A lovely read

I loved the developing relationship between Carra and Jo throughout. For me, the story held a perfect balance of 'steamy' and 'romantic'.

The plot was fantastic. Impressionable characters, and a nice all around read. Keep it up!

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A real page turner!

First of all, I would like to say that I loved Zero and Alicia. I also noticed that you have written the same story in Spanish I believe? Very impressive.

Romance and Fantasy combined here in a magical way. This made for a great plot. I look forward to reading more of your work. Keep it up!

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Intriguing plot!

As you mentioned earlier, there are some issues relating to punctuation and grammar. This is to be expected with any draft though.
I love the attention to detail with each of the characters, A story is only as good as it's characters after all. I think that Tina is my favourite if I had to choose.

There's also the car choice, I mean who doesn't love an Impala.

I look forward to reading the rest of the story when it is finished.

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Inspiring!

I had never realised just how much difference short, powerful chapters could make to the plot of a story. Naturally, some stories require longer chapters. This one was perfect! I especially loved the comparisons between our world and his. Very creative, and a pleasure to read.

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An incredible read!

It has been noted many times already throughout the comments, but your writing style is brilliant. I felt as though I was sitting there with each of the characters. I look forward to reading more of your work!

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Amazing!

I have to admit, the title of the book drew me straight in. The plot took care of the rest. It was a great read, and a story that I feel I could come back to again.

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Incredible!

This is an intense, and an utterly engrossing fast-paced stroll through human history and culture.

This wonderful story allows the reader to engage more with this particular time period, through the eyes of some truly interesting characters.

Your chapter structure could not have been chosen better for writing this kind of story. I believe that the story's first person narrative, from multiple perspectives, was a sound idea, and it kept me wanting more.

This story was an emotional rollercoaster, where plot twists and ever developing characters were in abundance.

Chapter Four has me yearning to discover what has become of these loveable characters, especially Ester, and Klara. With the use of such an effective plot twist at the very end of this chapter, I am eager to read on.

There were a few punctuation flaws and missing words, as previously mentioned. yet that can be expected within any piece of writing.
Do let me know when you have wrote some more, I look forward to reading it. Great work!

Craig. B.

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A unique and vivid portrayal of another world!

I thoroughly enjoyed the descriptive technique that the writer applies here. This is truly another world that I would like to see more of. The dialogue also kept me enthralled, I just wish that there was more to read, certainly something to look forward to. There may have been couple of punctuation mistakes, but the plot of the story overshadowed these, very enjoyable.

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