Bree Yung

Dreamland

The path of writing may be difficult, but the journey is also beautiful

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Good and unique!

I like what you have brought to the table. I like Mila's language style and how you have a definition for the time period's slang words at the beginning of each chapter. I also like the mystery aspect of this story and how you keep your readers wondering what is happening. Keep up the good work!

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Very nice!

I really like what you have going here! It's nicely descriptive and it makes me curious as to what's going to happen next. There are some grammar that needs to be fixed and reviewed, but otherwise a very nice story.

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Keeps you on edge

This story is very intriguing. With every twist and turn of the story, you will find yourself wanting to know what's next. The characters are well rounded and not flat. The events leading to the ending is exciting. What I would suggest is to review the grammar. Otherwise, very nice. Keep up the good work :)

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