Crosal1991

Hi! I write stories of fantasy, horror and sci-fi. Hope you enjoy them.

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An excellent fantasy novel

This story has an intriguing plot and an interesting worldbuilding. It's also very entertaining and easy to read.
Jon is the classic fantasy hero and Graham the classic mentor but I didn't feel like they were a cliche. I really want to know how the story goes.

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Broken princess

Okay, I have to say the plot is interesting. Ella's past is intriguing but i have some problems with the story.

The first one is the lack of descriptions. You should describe the places the characthers visit. Descriptions help the reader to get more immersed into the story.

The second one is Aiden's characther. I think he falls in love with Ella too fast. Sometimes he seems obsessed with her.

To conclude the review I have to admit romance stories are not to my taste but this story has potential. Keep writing it!!!

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