Crystal_Sinful

This is very well done and unique

This story is very touching, and I love the characters and Liza. You can feel her emotions. The dialogue is so beautifully done. Few errors we are. Or perfect, I know I am not, but I am very interested in this story. I haven’t found a book that keeps my attention long, I am looking forward to reading more. This is truly a great book to read I would definitely recommend it to others.

Potential

I gave you four stars because I would have liked more description of the characters. You have some errors try using a grammatical app. I think this will have great potential. We all have our writing style. I will finish the book, curious to see where this leads, and I will change my review once I see more chapters; there is only a few to go off of.

Enjoyed

The book was hot and steamy phew 😥 I noticed you said you will edited it so I am not going to critique the grammar and writing. You have a good dialogue going for you. When writing BDASM things can be tricky and you got it. I have a great understanding of BDSM. I enjoyed it.

Very good

I think you did very well with your writing style, my son enjoyed reading the book with me, I normally would pass a book up like this only because it is more for the younger generation. This held my interest. You’re timing was punctual. I don't have any criticism to say about this book. Well done, I recommend this for your children or the younger generation.

Intrigued

I like this book a lot; it held my attention. I usually get bored of stories quickly. You can write beautifully and capture your characters and their emotions. I love how you have them interact with each other, for that is essential in a story. The dialogue is excellent, the story plot was good so far. I definitely recommend this story.

Bored

You have excellent writing techniques. I was bored with the whole story. The characters were boring. There wasn't enough interaction between the characters—just my personal opinion.

Think this book has potential to be so much better. From what I have seen from your other books.

Great plot so far

The plot was interesting, I did enjoy reading. There were some grammatical mistakes but noting you can’t read past.

I like it

I like the dialogue and how you have great details in your writing. I have a hard time with these books, but I am going to finish this book; I did recommend this to other readers on here who I know who enjoy these books, you have talent in writing, and I think you could even publish. 😊

Great story plot

The writing style is good. I love how you build your characters already in the first chapter. I notice some words were misused. I am not really into the typical teenage romance, but I give credit where it’s due the descriptions are well written. I did see you said Ellie and Max were together a year, then went to a three, then a few months; that part is a little confusing. I wish you the best in this novel.

Keep up the excellent work!

Very good

This is very well written. I like the characters, I like how you capture their emotions in the book. At first I was worried it was going to bore me but it not bore me it kept my interest. I definitely will read more of this book I like to see where it goes. The author is very good with detail, almost like you inside the characters they their emotions are written. Amazing.

Amazing

There are some grammar errors, nothing I can’t get past. I love how you pull readers into this plot is solid and captivating. I want to read more. The chemistry is off the charts. You are very descriptive in your writing. I cannot wait to see what this author does with his book. I want to read more I am intrigued. I can get bored fast with a book. I can’t wait for more updates. I can’t wait to see where this goes. Well done so far. 

Amazing

Great plot. There are some grammar issues that I can’t get past. I was pulled in immediately. There has only been a few books that I found on here that keep me interested. Keep up the great work.

Potential suitor

I love the plot of the book, how this book is light hearted, some comedy added in. The dialogue is done well. There was some grammar issues and little confusion with the characters when they interact with one another nothing that can’t be fixed. I am interested to read more. You hold my interest and I don’t find that often I get bored easily.

Spit fire 🔥

This is not really my type of book to read. I am amazed at how well you have written the characters and gave great detail and strong dialogue. I seen a few errors nothing that will throw readers off. I am curious how the book will end. Good luck on this amazing book. You have me intrigued.

Great job 👏

I am changing my review as this book is written a lot better you have a great dialogue that is done well. The chapters are more clearer and written really well. Still a few grammar issues but not a big deal.

Great!

There were some grammar issues, nothing that can’t be fixed. I do like the characters as they are not like a robot in some books. I enjoy the mother-son duo, as I am a mother myself.
I am looking forward to reading more of this book. The dialogue is vital. Once a book is finished, I will change the review.

I really Enjoy it.

I honestly don’t really have anything negative to say as I really enjoyed the book so far I did get confused with characters at first but when I read again I got where you were going with it. I love how it’s takes place in the 90’s I can relate with April’s character. I did had a few giggles. I normally like to review a finished book. This was I needed a lead heated Romance-comedy. Like how this different from others’ I have read. Think once the story moved along I will enjoy more of the characters.

Great story

think the onshore story was done very well. Do you plan to make this into something more? I think it would be amazing if you did to give insight of what happen to his family, life with his family. I could go with emotion like he was insane talking to ghost of his past. You really hit the emotion part very well. Dialogue was done well. Definitely gave me the chills and was creepy in a good way. Good job

Very well done

You have a great dialogue; the writing is on point. I, however, have a hard time getting into this kind of story, but your way of writing is captivating. The first chapter pulled me in.

You're paragraphs were placed right. I think you did great overall.

Loved this story.

The writing is beautiful; I am going to add this to my reading list. I love how I can feel the emotions in this book. The dialogue is done well. The characters sound like humans—just overall amazing.

Nicely done

I usually am not into these stories, but I took the time to read them. I must nice, and it is a charming work. It was written well. Keep me intrigued, wanting to read more. Not a lot of stories in here can hold my interest, but your dose. There were some errors but nothing that wrecks the book. Very good I hope they're more chapters to come!

Beautiful

This story is beautiful so far. I added the book; the dialogue was excellent; the interaction with the characters was very well done. I want to read more of your book. I usually can't hold interest in books. I am very interested in this book.

Loved it

I really like this horror book. This was a great fanfic from what I have read, I usually don’t read fanfic books. I am fan of the 70’s, 80’s early 90’s. Horror flicks. I am intrigued plan to finish the book.

Love it

I liked this book. I am not into fantasies. This pulled me in. The Interaction, the dialogue was beautifully done. I am becoming invested in your story; that is hard; I become bored with these stories. I recommend this book to everyone. What I would like to say is you should change somethings like leaving some mysterious. Only one thing I have to say about this beautiful book.